This was your first smutty fanfic? I can't believe it, this is insanely HOT! And the voyeur part with Genma...
I loved all of it, you're an amazing writer and I'll certainly be reading more of your work .

Sizzling HOT.

So wonderful! I love the relationship they have, and the fact that Kakashi didn't even stop when Gemma showed up had me cracking up.

nice!

happy fun sexy times AND what you did to Genma- 3

love it!
genma should've joined! hahah

Poor Genma! Haha

This was very entertaining to read :)

hahaha too funny poor Genma hee hee.

I decided to check out your first work last night before I forced myself to sleep. Oh Genma. That made me chuckle a bit.

-gives a guy sensei thumbs up- I approve of your smut :p

I shall certainly have a look at your other one shots when I get a chance.

Great job! I've earned a newfound respect for smut... You're one good author! Looking forward to your next story! _

So this was your first fanfic, wow! I hadn't gotten to this one yet in your reading list (one of the best things about belonging to a comm is you get the benefit of your friends' lists unless you've already read them...you know...)

So Genma got embarrassed, huh. Sweet, he deserved that one!

This was really fun, energetic (in more ways than one, but I'm meaning the pace of the story, lol) and tight. (I blame you that my descriptions are all double entendres today...)

R.

Wow... damn. I can't believe this was your first lemon. Simply... wow! Loved it. Sinfully delicious! :D

Bravo!

wait doesnt he have a mask on? how could she kiss at the begining

oh, my... that was fun! n_n!