A brilliant piece of writing which really made my day! Thanks for the perfect mixture of humour and feelings, and most of all, for Alistair being truly himself.

What a romantic depiction of that conversation. That final kiss into her palm and the vow exchanged is as strong and binding as any marriage vow.

Flippin' awesome. I loved it. Really, the lamppost part is my most favorite in the Dragon Age game.. Laugh every time I think about it. XD

Great job!

You make me squeal so hard. I'm very glad I'm in the house alone or I'd have some very confused roommates.

aww. i liked this, are you continuing?

Again, I'm in awe at your writing. Am I reading these in reverse order though? Hm. Oh well, it doesn't matter. I can always read them over in the odrer you wrote them in. I would hardly consider it a chore to read these multiple times. Reading your work inspires me to make my own, but I'm so scatter brained it'd probably take me forever to get it done. :/ But this is supposed to be a review of your story, isn't it? See what I mean by scatter brained? I'm glad you made a story centered around the lamppost incident. I just remember giggling like a schoolgirl when Alistair said that. My husband said I was blushing. Haha. And you certainly didn't disappoint. You take characters that are already so full of life and do even more with them. It's truly a joy to read. :)

*falls over dead with squee* That was fantastic. Do you mind if I shake your fanfic in the hope more falls out? No? Thanks ever so. :P

This is so sweet - the last few paragraphs made me all gooey and "aw"! I really enjoyed reading it! Thank you so much for sharing. :)

This was an excellent one-shot. You definitely have the knack of writing Alistair's cheeky personality extremely well. I really enjoyed this a lot! And I hope you write more in the future! :D

Swoon! Love love love it. The training sequence was fantastic, with him getting distracted by her repeatedly. Oh Alistair, so adorable and awkward. :3

Thank you for sharing!