I absolutely adore all your Merlin stories! they are so funny!

Lovely story.

Cute. :) Although the ending wasn't very memorable though. Usually the end shows some kind of closure of the main characters feelings.. in this case, Arthur's for Morgana. But still..not bad. ;)

As how things should be.

Lol.

Ahh. Would have been nice if it had turned out this way.

I love this story so0o frigen much. Here are a few of my favorite lines.

"I'm not stuck," said Arthur.

"Me neither," added Morgana. "And I'm not talking to you."

"Me neither."

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"It's meant to be a scene of you being stabbed fatally through the heart."

"Well, if I have to wait to die until you're able to accurately render the scene, then I'll have you to thank for my immortality."

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"What are you doing today?"

"Plotting to take over Albion." Arthur glared, Morgana sighed. "Sewing, why?"

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"Running away?"

"I prefer to think of it as a strategic retreat."

"Just because you're a dangerously unstable sorceress, that's no reason to leave."

"Subtle as ever, Arthur."

-"Thank you. Now, Morgana, I know you have lots of plotting to take over Albion and raising armies against me to be getting on with-"

"Absolutely loads."

My last scene was my favorite. This was too cute and too funny. I loved it!

i liked this story. the scenes felt real and sweet. good job!

Immortal Arthur. XD

lol that sweet great work!

Very cute, especially the beginning.

"if I have to wait to die until you're able to accurately render the scene, then I'll have you to thank for my immortality" I love this line, and so many others. Great fic!

loved it ] x

hehe, brilliant! you captured everything perfectly!

Hee! Oh, i adore this. :D I love all your stories - they're great!

I loved the easy banter between them. they really did read like a brother and sister. My favourite section was the last bit - i LOVED the last bit. "with gwen wearing arthurs crown and merlin wrapped in a sheet" and "if you three could stop playing pass the bloody crown for five minutes" and "lots of plotting and raising armies -" "Absolutely loads" and "But as you can see, my court sorcerer is an idiot" - 'merlin was trying and failing to disentangle himself from the sheet he was wrapped in...' Lol! I just laughed my way through the whole last bit. it was so lighthearted and fun and i could imagine the scene so perfectly.

All in all, well done. :) i LOVED it.

Bundi