Please update. The story has great potential.

OHHH please update. this story has so much potential and i can't wait to read the rest. if you can't update, why not see if someone wants to adopt the story.

good story

You have the characters NAILED, man! And the thing with the little girl reminds me of "Bones" but I a good way. If murder can ever be describes as a good thing. Miiiikey's gooooot a giiiiiirlfriend! Or a stalker. Or both. Please continue.

Wow just wow! I am absolutely loving this story! Wonderful writing I hope to read more!

Please continue, its pretty interesting.

Coo~l!

Great beginning!

You have so nailed the family! The dialogue is perfect, and getting into Mikey’s head is a scary prospect at best (God knows what you’ll find in there). I could definitely picture in my head these events happening like this.

My attention has most definitely been grabbed and curiosity peaked. Who is this woman? Is she real? What is she? Is Mikey being stalked my a horny ghost? Why all the secrecy? xD

Loved the little warning she gave him via the scent at the end there, just enough to remind him not to talk - curiouser and curiouser.

Can’t wait to see what happens next!

LOVE IT! More please!

That seen with the dogs reminds me of something out of Watchmen. Is that where you got it from?

Yes or no, it's still good. I still love it to bits, I was still... I want to say shaking, even though I wasn't, but it was a shaky feeling, ya know? Does that make ANY since at all?

Anyway, I can't wait to read more! UPDATE SOON!

Wow. WOW. Only five reviews? This is the best TMNT fic I've read in a long time! You're not afraid of the grit of a truly dark story, and you've established a really intriguing villain without letting us know a thing about her. The mystery and pathos are wonderful. Michelangelo's characterization is spot-on. He acts like a teenage kid without acting like an ACTUAL kid. These guys see a lot, but you made it abundantly clear why the sight of the little girl was too much for him-and in a society where almost nothing is shocking, that's saying a lot. Just from the chapter, I can tell why anyone would be curled up under their bed in hysterics. It's a horrible, horrible thing to even consider, but you didn't shy away from giving us the unspeakable details, engaging our empathy for Susie and Mike both when, paragraphs before, we really had nothing invested in this child. I don't think I'll ever forget it.

Adding you to alerts. I'm gonna want to keep track of this one. Wonderful work.

Oh this is good, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Woah...that was a bit of a turn from the last chapter. Oh, wait. I bit? I mean a big-ol-slap-in-the-face, knock your sorry behind on the ground twist. Yeesh! But very, VERY well written. Seriously. I'm getting the hang of this first person thing and its interesting. The way you explain things and throw in little random Mikeyness here and there so we can feel his emotions but still know its him.

Wow, all I can say is well done. Amazing chapter. I like how its completly opposite from the previous one. Talk about keeping your readers on edge! Well done!

GOD this is just! Oh god! I mean I'm worried about Mikey and why he's haveing these REALLY freaky and unusual dreams. But I'm also kinda excited about anything erotic comming up. I guess you could say I'm in a bit of a state of shock right now. Please update soon.

This looks intresting, I looke forward to more soon

Caught my attention with the word "erotic" not gonna lie! Lol. I really enjoyed this. Not really into first person but it works for Mikey. Guess that's just him making first person his beyoch or some fun stuff like that. "I made a plays-hard-to-get and forceful woman? What the hell is wrong with me?" LOVE that line! Lol. This entire thing was highly entertaining. Can't wait to see where you go with it!

And Raph muscled like a pitbull...m MM, damn right he is!