Cliff hanger but thanks for the read

I facking hate FF sometimes. I NEVER GET ALERTS AND MISS STUFF LIKE THIS. AND I MISS YOU. Also this was fantastic. :D 3

Love it! And I really think you should continue the storyline of the last one-shot... ;)

Curiouser and curiouser, lol.

I like the flash of the past, as though Lisbon was running through moments in her life whilst fearing it may be over.

A rather chilling conclusion, the nightmares, the finale part. Two shooters. Ouch.

Nicely done!

Haha, only you would get someone to beta their own present. I don't blame you though! When I started writing again, I started with um, a Big Bang, so I knew it would be beta'd.

Firstly: I think the prompt just suits itself perfectly to Red John being alive post 3x24 and therefore I'm entirely unsurprised we both thought of that when supplied with this prompt. There's something about the concept of Jane being neatly away that really lends itself to Lisbon & Red John fic.

Anyway. I think this is one of your best oneshots to date. It has a lovely eerie quality to it and despite being brief compared to your usual types of work, it felt slow and the reveals were made with perfect precision. I love the fact you're experimenting stylistically too, especially given the fact this is you returning to writing and not easing yourself back in. It's good to see you didn't take the 'easy' route and just do something normal first. When you revealed the two shots, I shuddered. Very suspect.

I LOVES YOU! *hugs*

I am enjoying reading this story, even if it is out of season. The end of chapter three made me laugh loudly enough that my cats are looking at me funny. I have often thought there should be fic in which someone offers Jane some catnip tea, it being an old folk remedy for insomnia.

Wow, that was a fabulous take on how they got the case and how the first two weeks with Jane could have gone.

lol, seriously? The lemonade stand? Stroke of genius. Really.

"Empty sofa in the morning- Lisbon take warning." And that should be a line in the show.

"Some ghosts are never gone, Patrick. Honor their memory by not becoming one yourself."

Love that line. And the line about pain and feeling. Go Lisbon! Honestly, Jane acts as if he's the only one to lose his family. As if no one else has lost someone to a murderer. Or even felt responsible for their loved one's murder. sigh. His character is so interesting- I both like him and become annoyed by him (simultaneously). Anyway, really liked this chapter (and the Sanskrit reference as my research is hitting that area right now!).

LOL! That was great. I'm glad you decided to post it.

AHAHAHAHAHA! Oh man, that is perfect.

' she ignored the surprised looks from her agents as she set the food on an empty desk and passed out the warm beverages.

"And her heart grew three sizes that day,"'

And I also love the Cho part "The winds of change"...hehehe.

I love this! Great explanation for the team getting the RJ case and I especially adored Jane's cheekiness throughout the whole story and Lisbon's reaction to it.

And yay for Minelli - I still miss him too!

Oh, this was fun. I really enjoyed your take on the prompt, and it was very well written. Nicely done :)

"Nope. All beverages were purchased and consumed under complete free will."

Awesome line!

Hahah fantastic take on how they got the case )

I loved it! Great job! :)

well this was a very interesting take on the prompt. Extremely creative and an unexpected ending. I liked it a lot. I'm glad you're back :)

Yana