This story loses appeal fast, I agree it was fun at first, but I dont think this kind of thing should be strung along to be a long story, 50k words max I think. It all gets dull after constant repeat, youve got to remember, most people read all these chapters at a time, not 1 at a time like you authors do when actually making them, things that add up and gets redundant is faster for the readers.

Less Barret, and I think Ill enjoy it.

As funny as this was, Barret's dialogue was fking annoying to read and I couldn't finish reading because it was so irritating. Everything else was great though... just ain't for me.

are you doing more

What a wonderful universe and series of chapter titles.
~Synthia

This fic is insane, has no clear plotline even with the well known base it was concieved from, and is mostly run bty the rules of cool, insanity, and funny, and I loved every moment of it, even if Barret is a pain in the ass to understand.

Still, with all the coolness, I am left saddened by the lack of updates in the past two years. Please, come back good sirs. I would love to see this fic continued.

Wait, who was it that took their shirt off in the sword shop? Cloud?

the facedown with the president was awesome!

I like your story. With a humorous story, I laugh at each chapter. Keep up the good work! By the way, don't and if forget to check my profile. I made a new story, please review and if you like it, then follow me. Thank you. Updates would be every Saturday.

I was reading this, and a 'Stop Smoking' ad appeared.

Barret, you high moron, look what you did.

"Aeris pointed out, raising a TOMBSTONE above her head." hypocritical humor at its finest.

"Violence is the language of the ancients ?"
- Priceless.

Heya SamJaz. Just wondering if you intend to continue this story? It's one of my favorites.

Died when the spirit of Gandalf took over Barret for a second. The death speech is a classic ;_;

The dragon kill was also excellent!

Tifa *was* acting suspiciously normal for an AU character. Should've seen it coming!