Reviews for Flirt
MaraFreila chapter 1 . 2/12
Ohhh, It's Minelli.I though that you were describing Cho
Leafenclaw chapter 1 . 8/20/2017
This is absolutely wonderful and I love it. What a daring dive into a serial killer's mind. Most of your Red John's inner monologue is timeless, which is doubly impressive seeing as you wrote it so early after the show started airing. Thank you so much for writing and sharing it.
Munkeyfump20 chapter 1 . 5/16/2017
No that's not a scenario that I would like but well that's the writers
LouiseKurylo chapter 1 . 7/30/2015
Um, you rather brilliantly get into the head of a serial killer. Maybe you should worry.\

Terrific. Thanks.
Spitfire303 chapter 1 . 3/10/2015
In all honesty until you mentioned rigsby i thought u was him :D also i am intrigued by the idae that it could be him
Dream24 chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
That was incredible. I felt a chill go through me as I read this. I like how you portrayed Red John and all without giving away his "identity" until the very end. I have read a few of your stories and enjoyed them. You have a great writing style and delightful imagination.
Queerasil chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
weird!
santanabobana chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
I thought it was Cho! Wow, that was really frightenly good. For a second I thought it was Jane but then the "him" made me realize it was somebody else. A little bit of Jello mixed in the creepiness is a win in my book.
boutondor chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
That was wonderfully creepy. I have a huge thing for creepy!Red John - especially with Lisbon.

I'm always disturbed by the Minelli is RJ theory, although I totally see its merits.
superwoman1015 chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
I've always thought that if Red john was going to be someone we know that Minelli would be a good candidate. This was pleasantly freaky. Thanks for writing.
MissNitaGirl chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
i like this story ALOT

and im so happy ur friend convinced u to write it

it was fantastic and you both started and ended it just right.

it is one of the BEST! pices of writing i have read EVER! and the way u described just about every thing was perfect.

now i have to ask

are you sure you are not Red John?

lol

you wrote his character perfectly

any better and it would be weird

crongratz on a fantasticly creepy story
hardly loquacious chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
I realized that I forgot to review this when I originally read it so I'm rectifying that now. This was really well written, and deliciously creepy. I wasn't entirely sure who your narrator was until near the end. I originally thought Cho when it was obvious it was someone close to the team. Minelli actually makes more sense, but still. Very nicely done!
Mac1769 chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
Really really well-written. Sent shivers down my spine and I'm not easily spooked by things! I've always entertained the fact that RJ is closer than everyone thinks, e.g. someone in the office, and Minelli seems to almost fit "the profile". This story totally reminded me of "Dexter", as he explains why he kills and how he chooses his victims in each episode. LOVED it, you should definitely write more fics.

Kitty.
Lindsey chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
I don't know what to say and this barely happens to me! This was just... wow. Creepy. But great! Really incredible!
khalek-aeryn chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
wow...i am scared currently. i have always thought it would be awesome if it was him :)
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