This was beautiful!

the story was super awesome and i'd pliz urge u to continue

Damn! I've been waiting for the two to figure out that they are mutually in love and you just slammed them together perfectly! It was a great read!

boys *rolls eyes*

I loved this story a lot, thank you :) !

def needs an epilogue! Wait hehe why not a few chapters THEN an epilogue?

*Clears throat* ok, now that I'm done let's begin. OMFG! I'm IN LOVE with this! It was PERFECT in every sense I could think of! I mean I love the ending the best because it's fluffy yet very deep and realistic. This chapter managed to captivate me but the whole story held me prisoner. I really didn't want it to end but the end was better then I could ever imagined, I enjoyed it greatly.

I also loved your use of the excerpt from "Flowers in the Attic" - I always wanted to read the book but now that I have it in Jalex form I think I'm more than satisfied, after all that was my porpuse in the first place and I wouldn't have been able to vision something as good in my mind as you made me using this story, so I'd like to thank you.

You finally updated! Phew!

This chapter was amazing and beautiful. I loved it. Nice way to seal it with a kiss ;)

I think it's okay and complete in itself even without an epilogue, but an epilogue would be nice )

This was a really good story :)

Loved the ending *-*

An epilogue would be nice,specially if with people finding out about them(mom,dad,max,harper or whoever)...I don't know,for some reason my favorite part in every Jalex story is when people find out haha but then,you're the writer,you'll know where to take your story more than I do...

yes, yes, yes, yes, yes! (:

you need an epilouge.

this is wonderful.

This is really, really, REALLY good. I'm all about love that goes against what is socially acceptable... and I really want to read the book that Alex is reading.

Your writing is really excellent, very descriptive and poetic without being out of character. You build the 'discovery' of Alex's feelings very nicely, and get the sexual tension across perfectly. Can't wait for the next one!

Amazing story! Not only did I love the book, but your writing is excellent as well. It is a win-win for me. I hope you continue. I am sorry you are upset, feel better soon.

This was a good chapter, I liked the hug scene. I'm sorry you are upset, I hope it gets better for you, I'm currently sick and feeling like $hit

I think this is an interesting idea and well-written as well. Alex's reactions to the book are believable and in-character. Nice job. I hope you feel better soon.

awww, I hope you feel better soon :)

Don't worry about the length of the chapter, it was amazing, loved it. So glad you finally updated :)

Please update ASAP :)