Oh my goodness you HAVE to finish this! I feel like 5 years is a little bit to have this story on hold but oh my god, I wanna read the rest! I also feel like reviewing this at THIS time is a little odd but I want to finish this. Please don't leave it open and unfinished. Please!

omg that was awesome :D

u better make another chapter :P

:D :D :D

Great work so far! Although I'm sorry to hear you have put this story on the back burner, I do understand why.

I am going to subscribe to this anyway, just in case you continue :)

your story is really good I want you to update more please I like Kopa and Vitani stories they are really good so please update as soon as you can ok.

This is too good! Really descriptive so plz plz plz plz PLZ carry it on!

Who IS kopa?

i've watched lion king 1, 1 and a half, and lion king: simba's pride

WHO THE HECK IS KOPA?

That was pretty amazing. Very emotional. I was rather disappointed that Zira just fell, though. In my opinion, Disney should have kept that final clip where she committed suicide. I'm not sick and twisted or anything, it just did wonders to her character. She was insane, yes. She was heartbroken, yes. But she was also the product of Disney, the maker of family movies. Sigh, I suppose it can't be helped.

I enjoyed the little flashback you wrote about Taka. More to the point, the fact that Taka knew Zira for a long while as a friend. It was interesting. Though they kind of talked odd for two month old cubs. I was expecting at any moment for them to break out in "thees" and "thous".

"Oh dearest Taka," Zira hast said as before. "Twas merely I! My wishes to thee that thoust might have seen thy face!" She laughed but lightly. "But Taka," she said, "Are thee not well? Thine eyes dost tell me of thy inner turmoil. They boil with thy hidden rage. Prithee, tell unto me your sorrow."

That would have been weird. Eh, I appear to have gotten carried away. They didn't always talk...uniquely. There was only a word or two that just seemed...advanced for a cub their age.

Right. Well, I look forward to what you're going to do with Kopa. It should be interesting.

:O Well don't that just beat all! Haha sorry felt like saying that.

Anyways. I love your writing style. It's really dark and stuff, but the story flows very well. And the occasional typos are very entertaining. Example: You put ZIra twice. Reminded me of robot models, like the ZIra K-83 Destroyer or something... You even put SImba once. Had a field day over that ;D

Nah, I'm just teasing.

And your origin of Scar's scar was a bit incorrect, but it's ok. Only the greatest lion king fans know the real origin. Us and little kids.

Poor Zira...

Hey, since Loin King 2 is over what happens with Kopa? Will he finall tell his family that he is alive and well? Or will he continue to stay in the background?

Yay, the movie plot is done! Now Kopa comes back and... probably causes a lot of yelling and crying.

Word of the day: Kopafully (adv.) - appearing in a surprising or accidental manner; unintentionally

Sorry, just felt like messing with you a bit...I don't know why that typo was so funny to me, but I guess anything's funny when you're tired. Anyhoo, back to reviewing.

Your dialogue's improved a lot in terms of how natural it feels. There were still a couple rough spot, but that's to be expected, I guess. In any case, it's still a fantastic improvement. Great job.

Zira's memories at the end were also extremely well-done. The only thing I would've asked for more of is what Mufasa thought of Taka, and also a little bit more of exactly why Zira was so willing to follow Taka/Scar. I know it was implied that she fancied him a fair bit (apparently, I also turn British when I'm tired...), but just a hint more insight on her thoughts would've been nice. Taka's reaction to Ahadi's attack and Zira's final thoughts were perfect, though, especially the last few repeated lines. I love seeing/using repetition for emphasis like that, so that really stood out to me as well-done. Bravo.

Well, we've freed ourselves from the burden of canon now...now, it gets interesting. Update soon!

Nothing I havent already seen proposed before but nice presentation, Taka/Zira always makes me happy. Look forward to more.

Yay! Great job

this really isn't a choice but i would like her to drag someone over the edge with her.