Wow just wow

"Blitzwing, can you kindly get your schizophrenic aft off of me?!" I loved that line. I laughed. I laughed all the way through this fanfic. It truly is a masterpiece.

he he, blitzwing is a pedophile

LOL! Definitely one of my favorite Transformers stories!

you should make a sequel. and i LOVE this! it is amazing

Dude, I feel the EXACT SAME WAY about slash! (Poor Shockwave! :( )

LOL. i could not STOP sniggering. this made my night :D

~dharak

I'm faviorting this so I can show it to my sister. Also, are you going to do another one, kinda like a sequel, with more transformers? Maybe the seekers?

Oh my god, just lol. This has been of my greatest finds on for the "Greatest humour" reward. Seriously, I had an amused smirk plastered on my face the entire time I read this, while having to control my fits of giggles -which I might add was a little troublesome- throughout the whole fanfic. You my friend have good taste in humour! In fact, I think I still have that grin permantly stuck on now! Good luck, in any future fanfictional stories. -

PS. Goodness, you don't know how hard it is to find a decent non-slash humourous story now-a-days... some fangirls and er- fanboys(?) are a bit too... strange for my tastes when it comes to writing. In a sense, I know how Shockwave feels about the more rabid and uncomfortable zones of Tranformers fandom...

Oh my frikken gosh, XDDDDDDD! H-holy *gasp pant* sn-snowballs! This is one of the absolute funniest things I have ever read! XD Those pictures came in real handy, huh? I cannot even begin to say just how hard I laughed while reading this story. Completely win!

Keep writing! -Silverfire

holy shiznit! i couldn't stop laughing! was that starscream that screamed? and i loved the drunk scene hehehee that was to die for. ooooo please make another one except...have starscream or some one else come with blitz and shock. like follow them or something. ;-D

that was so freaking awesome! the ending was hilarious!

love the last line xD! It was a pretty good story :)

Ah, the good old planting-a-horrifying-picture-for-your-greatest-enemies-to-find-but-being-too-busy-in-their-work-to-properly-celebrate-so-a-simple-exchange-of-a-highfive-without-saying-a-word-must-suffice plan. All hail the Decepticons, glitches.

Short, sweet, and completely stupid! Awsome!