The annoying as hell thing is I wrote that review and posted it, but forgot to log in. Oh well.

Well, This was a good fan fic...Up until Chapter 6. The story that was at play just died, instead leading to robo sex. And that bit at the end about Starscream being trans, was probably hilarious at the time but not anymore.
I would have loved to see the end of this tale, it had a lot of momentum.
Well, actually, it started going downhill in 5 (or so) when Prime realized Starscream was raped by Megatron, that just seemed like a needlessly edgy plot device for nothing but shock value.
Despite it's faults, I'm still sad it ended when it did. It's been 8 years, and I know we shouldn't expect a comeback, but never say never, eh?

Write more soon please.

Every now and again I just have to come back to this amazing price of literature. And, as always, I am so sad when I hit that last chapter. I keep this insane hope that one day I'll get the alert saying this was updated.

I'm really, really sad you're not continuing this story :C

Very, very interesting story! And there's so much more I want to see!

I hope you haven't given up on this!

This is so interesting! Im so glad I decided to check out your other TF stories!

If your still planning on continuing this eventually, Im looking forward to the next chapter!

I love how differently your portraying Starscream, & the bond.

What you wrote of this was excellent, with some of the hottest plug-n-play I've read so far.

Yessssssss. By far, the best Transformers story w/ a Starscream x Optimus Prime paring that I have ever read! Thank you so much for this, please continue to update when you have both the inspiration and the opportunity do so.

I do hope you continue this at some point. I know it's been a while, but I greatly enjoyed redding it, and I'd really like to see what happens...

I'd love to see this continued! It brings up some interesting concepts, like the fact that Cybertronian society doesn't seem to accept the loser faction very well. And the whole Primus thing is intriguing too.
Anyway, nice work :)

To Guest: I would totally be up for RPing anytime. Just give me a buzz at nightelfcrawler on aim, msn, or serenitydragon on gmail/gtalk.

Aah, I knew starting this that it wasn't complete and it never will be, but it still hurts. There are so many things I want to see-Starscream facing the council, TC and Warp reuniting with each other and with Starscream... hot Starscream/Optimus sexings... augh!

If you ever want to role play some scenes from this... ;)

Hi! I just started this story a couple hours ago, and it was/is fantastic! I'll be sure to check your profile every so often in the hopes that you start updating (this) again. I really like this pairing, and I like the way that you portray the characters (believable and in-character). Oh, and you'll be happy to know that I haven't noticed any grammar/spelling errors either! Thank you for writing this, and may you have good luck with your future endeavors!

Daww, love the story so far. XD I wasn't expecting any sparkling talk in this one, I'll admit, so it was a real treat for me, whether a sparkling comes from it or not. Its still a cute concept. Derp~

Other then that... Wish it was finished. But a lot of very good stories are never finished. XD Can't do much about that~