Aw. That was sweet! Especially how Yugi basically had to figure things out on his own. This was awesome!

-d101

Really good job! I actually really like this, and I actually like how you made Yugi into an android ).

Aww, I really liked this story. C:

The ending was the best, though the whole story was interesting. And I really like your way of writing.

Great job!

~MT

Cute. Good. I like very much.

Too tired to write a full review right now... I might send you one another time, but right now, suffice to say that you did a great job with this.

Oh wow. This was very nice. Again, a very unexpected plot that hooked me. I like the sentience and personality given to each robot so they do feel more like Seto's children.

Oh cool, now I'm in a sci-fi mood! This story was really great! I loved it! And Yugi somewhat reminded me of Data in Star Trek. Hmm,

anyway good luck! *hugs* *wanders off to youtube to watch some Star Trek*

-Nemi

I love it. A little romance developing perhaps?

Wow, this is amazing. I loved the whole concept of Yugi being a robot and Seto being the creator- and the way you had Yugi returning over several months was a really effective way of telling the story. The ending was brilliant; I loved Seto's moment of affection when he tucked Yugi's hair behind his ear. So sweet! Well done, and good luck in the contest!

Bookworm

That was...odd. Imagining Yugi as a robot was rather strange, I have to say.

However, I liked it. I liked how you wrote the two of them, and it was a sweet little twist at the end. And rather fitting that Kaiba would love a humanoid robot. :) Nice work.

- Freaking cool is what this is!

WOW! Awesome sci-fi fiction, man! I mean it. But Seto Kaiba, a researcher? I think you just chose any category at random so you could just post your fiction.

Still it was wonderful.