I just want to say I really enjoyed this story. I was very entertaining and also tastefully written. I liked that the characters stayed very close to well their character. ;-)

cool

*pelvic thrusts*

This was wonderful. Just enough detail, not smut.. but you understood what was going on between Tucker/Hoshi and Archer/T'pol.

personally, Jon and T'pol were hotter. rawr.

poor Reed. I'd so hit that.

And Archer. who wouldnt?

good story, written well and very imaginative. could see it played out in my head.

thank you!

i am wowed and stunned by the beauty of this fic. I want my own personal Jon Archer. And i wanna get Pon Farr.

wonderful mind painting,Wanimo Aisha. a treat for the imagination indeed.

A realy good Storry

I love it

please write more!

Beppo Gunnar

Bonn, Germany

Most satisfying! Thank you!

Ah. What a treat this story was. Thank you for an excellent story, and for setting the standard on Pon Farr and A/T'P. Great writing!

Good story, lthought chapter five on was hard to read because up the uploading erros in place of the quoation marks. Could you sned m those chapters?
I've read some of your other fics at LingData and verious oter sites, and their all good. Keep it up.

It's great, but I thought I'd point something out. Eggs are not meat, some people think so because they come from chickens, but because the eggs are unfertilized there was no chance of them ever becoming meat. As a vegetarian myself, I assure you that we do eat them, it's Vegans who don't eat eggs or drink milk, they're concern is with the exploitation of animals.

Anyway, now that I finished that, I love the story. Pieces seem a little rushed, but it was well written and actually followed the rules of the Star Trek universe, which is always a plus. Keep up the writing and please excuse my mini lecture!

Cool...I just want to say...cool. That was a very interesting and insightful story. Makes me even interested in Trip and Hoshi's relationship. Thank you for posting this storyand you did a wonderful job on it.

Very good writing, and a well thought out stroy. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for the reading pleasure. My only request would be that your chapters be a bit longer.

sweet story

Really enjoyed this story. I like Archer/T'Pol and Trip/Hoshi as couples and this story was very sexy and well-written. I did have a little problem with the fact that I don't think Vulcan females experience pon-farr as a "madness" like the males do, on the other hand, that was an excellent way to get Archer and T'Pol together. Although it was stretching ST canon, your story was a great read!

lovely. hot,sexy and romantic. fab!

I just loved the story. You really need to add more chapters to it. I would be very much interested in seeing were the relatationships go. After all it is the early stages of earths journey into space,and all of the star fleet rules don't apply,and they are going to be out there a long time. Thanks Carolyn