I realize you wrote this in 2009, but as an author, I know I enjoy getting reviews years later on a story I wrote, and I don't always review, but oooh, boy! I loved your story!

In the first chapter notes you mention how the premise of the story is unrealistic. I didn't find it so much unrealistic, but improbable and exaggerated. I also found it highly amusing; that is why we have fanfiction! I loved how you used this exaggerated scenario for the outlet of how Kaname and Sousuke truly feel. It wasn't just a "I can help you / I need your help" case. They truly feel very deeply for each other and this weird side effect helped them reveal those feelings to the other person.

I did notice several sytac / missing word errors grammatically, but you also mention that you are translating from French, so those minor errors are completely understandable!

Well done, I loved it!

Can u pls write more? It's amazing btw!

Crap!It gave me a stiff!And that was just chapter 1!

aw this wasn't stupid, not even a little! GREAT WORK! lol It was wonderful! lol

bomting lool tha was awesome who knew ey? LOL your an amazing writer so keep writing k?

Finally! I just now noticed that this was finished! I've been waiting for the conclusion and lost track of watching for it. Loved it! Always a fan of well written smut, and this one was very nicely done! Keep up the great work!

A tasty lemon my friend. Thanks for finishing the story.

Awesome! I never realized i didn't review Chapter 2 for you. It rocked! Going off to read the exciting conclusion! Nice pre-lemonade refreshment.

Very good! It was HOT ;D

nice

this story is so hot...that's all i can say

is this the end?

awsome job. havent read anything in this fandom for a while, and when I did, it was hard to find an actual smut for any of the pairings.

nice, keep it up

Nicely written! Love, love, love it! Update soon!

wow... all I can say is this is overloaded with lemon, just what I've been looking for especially with this couple. I look forward to new chapters _