I love this story, my friend! The backstory on Xanatos and his dealing with it are interesting and different from what I've read anywhere else. I find I'm wishing you had written a sequel, so we could see Xanatos helping Bruck to become a great Jedi. That's okay; I can always just imagine it!

This is one of the greatest fics I've ever read! And it's unique! The whole story is a concept I've never heard of! Awesome!

It's one of the best, if not the best fanfiction about Xanatos that I've read.

Despite it being an AU (Xanatos and Bruck on the Light Side of the Force), You keep protagonists in character, which is not always that easy.

I absolutely enjoyed Xan toying with Bruck, especially when he told him about all the "lowly" positions he has had n the Order since the Telos mission.

Calling the Masters from the Council "perverts" was also hilarious.

One thing is sure - Xan is not an average Jedi. He's more of a gray Jedi. He understands Dark Side, is able to see when and how it's calling to Bruck, and that's why he can - maybe - save him from it.

Your Xanatos would probably also make a decent master for Anakin. :-) (Well, there's one story, where Xan actually is Anakins master. I don't recall who the author is, but the fic is very interesting too).

So: Congratulations on a great story. I would also like to ask Your permission to translate it (well, I should probably send a PM for this... Ok, that's what I'll do :) )

May the Force be with You!

Interesting Xanatos characterization.

For one reason, all the stories I read from you seem to have a sequel.. Someday. ANyway, I love this! Finally a fic with the characters the right way- no sweet talking. Very good, be sure I'll read more!

This is a great story. Your AU version of what happense to Xanatos is much more interesting to read than what we got in the books. It's really a great story and I wish your version was the official version. Great stuff, I only wish you would do more with Xanatos.

oh my..I loved this. You kept them so in character to the Jude Watson stories, even with the different results in their lives...I loved Xanatos toying with Bruck, and his working at his pride...I could see both Xanatos's and Bruck lives being this way had they not played out like they did in the JA series...great job.

Obi's Mom

I love this kind of Xanatos. This is the life he totally should have lived - Thanks for sharing and keep up the great work!

rofl...

Xanatos as waste master, disciplining Bruck Chun...

Nice twist!

This is brilliant, and amazing, and I love your Xanatos. I love this whole thing.

SEQUEL? PRETTY PLEASE?

(See, you made me capslock!)

This story is both really good and really weird so far!

This is the first time I ever heard the Jedi ever being called 'perverts.' It makes me want to laugh, yet agree with Xanatos at the same time.

Well this is certainly an interesting twist. And here I thought this fic was going to be about Xanatos' days as a Padawan. I'm surprised that Qui-Gon isn't a least bit disturbed by Xanatos' very blunt dark comments, but I suppose even though he's dark, doesn't mean he's evil.

hm. just a thought - is it just me, or does Bruck Chun kind of sound like he looks like Draco Malfoy? xD