I love your idea. The angst, it's just wonderfully written. I have a faint idea on who the "Friends" are... but who are they really? I'm guessing the Brotherhood got into some trouble, and not all of them made it out alive. Baldy the King is Charles Xavier... The "princes" are the X-Men... It's the "Friends" I don't get. Friends of Humanity? The suspense is killing me, therefore I will try my hardest awaiting your response.

*slowly claps three times* wow that was amazing, sad, but amazing. But, NO! MY POOR BABY!

Awwww, Pietro! This was so awesome! I loved it! X3

this is an awesome story, but its so dark! i felt so sad for pietro!

oh my.

I actually really liked this. i will have to think bout it alot (and maybe actually watch X-men evo :) but it was really, really powerful.

great work.

Raw, that's all I can think to say. Which isn't much mind you, but this blew me away nonetheless. (In a good way.)

::sparkle sparkle::
SAD!
write more

Wow, that was just- wow! WOW! I'm speechless! Ah, I love a story that leaves me speechless! _
This was just AWESOME!
~Ice Princess

Wow, that was very deep. I love how your portrayed Pietro, very much like he could be. And the metaphors were great. (Did I spell that right? Oh well.)

*snifs* WAAA! So sad.. THe friends are the FoH, right? I like the ending. "Yeah... Fiction." That was great! Write more!

weird but still very good. cute story. pietro cool! keep it up!

It's been said before, in all the other reveiws, but I'll say it again because I lack the creativiy to think up an interesting way to say it: the metaphors were great. Enough so you knew what they really portrayed, but not being painfully obvious.

Great story! Keep it up! Er...don't add any extra chapters or anything, cause that would ruin it.

This was sweet, haunting, touching story. And though the subject matter is serious, I laughed like a lunatic at the Baldy the King reference. I'm starting to think that Xaivier IS evil.

OMG... that was fabulous... Sad though... *sniffs* Great fic! :)