Awwww, this was such a sweet and awesome sequel! It's about time Kagami got some lovin'! XDDD

This story is going to my faves, no doubt! XP

-KAGEJASPER OUT!

..You're planning on writing a Tsukasa version? I can't wait. Nice story, BTW.

/sigh. After reading it, I can honestly say that I'm overall disappointed. There's nothing wrong grammatically or with the storytelling itself. In fact, I thought the resolution and conversation between Kagami and her friends was pretty good.

But when you reflect on it, Kagami is both the biggest asset and crux to this whole story because of how everyone treats her. Throughout every point of this story, she knows what's going on and her own personal feelings. However, the fact that everyone treats her so terrible in this story is mind-boggling. Every person in this story is looking at her like "Look at that tsundere. She's so tsundere, she doesn't even know it and you know she's just going to be obsessed with love, because she's a tsundere." That's how Konata is, that's how Kagami's friends are, and that's even how Tetsuya is.

It's almost like you want to say that Kagami is a strong, independent woman, but she can't just because everyone has that idea that she needs to fall in love because of her personality quirks. And it doesn't help when she falls in love with someone who has little to no positive attributes who barely even resonates with hardly any love at all for Kagami.

I am not saying you are a bad writer. However, I do have to critique that overall atmosphere of the story feels really condescending. And it's almost a cliche of most bad romantic comedies today where a starting relationship HAS to be snarky, shaky and all passion, no intimacy. I just think with the next story you do, really think about how you are going to plan it out. Work towards your strengths.

I liked it. It's also very amusing that Tetsuya's the shy one in the relationship after taking the lead through their entire friendship.

Great work all-in-all, I really enjoy this series and am looking forward to the next installment whenever you feel like picking it up again. Great stuff.

Wonderful as always. And a good-natured tease from Kagami.

It's always rare to find good non-yuri fics for Lucky Star, and though I enjoy yuri, when done as well as this, they are truly wonderful to read.

Very well-done, I'd say. But the end seemed a bit...abrupt. I thought something bigger and crazier would happen. But then, love is like that sometimes. Maybe I myself should realize that not everything has to end with a bang (sometimes literally).

I've got to say I am a hell of a yuri fanatic. Konami is pretty much canon to me, I watch anime with my yuri goggles on... and yet, here I am reading a fan fiction with not only a straight pairing, but an OC one at that. So I must commend you sir, on writing one of the very few OC/Straight pairing stories I could even consider saying I enjoy, truly you did a wonderful job all throughout this story. From the OC himself to the interesting different things that occurred like Kagami becoming a Seiyuu, it was all great. Thanks for posting and sticking with it and I hope to see more. *Crosses fingers for Konami fic* - Because you would write a dang good one.

Love it. Very Belivable and I hope to see more. Later.

This should be amusing. Still enjoying this a lot.

Hahahahaha! I love the part when Kagami discovers Misao and Ayano, is priceless xDDD

Oh man, I love your stories so much, you do such a wonderful job with the characters 3 [And, best of all, it doesn't contain yuri! *A*!]

Keep up the good work :D!

I got the NEEEDLESS part. Nice.

Later

This remains incredibly entertaining. Kagami and Tetsuya work very well together. Tsundere plus brutal honesty, it somehow all works out. To say nothing of how Tetsuya's a pretty well-rounded character himself, as well.

Great work. This series is still looking awesome.

hmm... a rather interesting chapter you got here. keep it up

Really? Is Ayano's boyfriend really Miso's brother, or did you just decide that for this story? Either way I'm not complaining, quite the opposite, but I'd like to know if he really is.

I really liked this chapter. It was very funny, and I liked the inclusion of Misao and Ayano, following the two around on their date.

I really like this story, but there's always stuff more important than writing, so I won't complain about updating speed. Congratulations on the promotion, by the way! _

It's nice to see Ayano and Misao get a spotlight. I like those two and it's kind of unfair how they don't get much attention in the anime and managa as the others do. Great chapter, especially Ayano's reactions.

Later.