That was adorable. There's something wonderfully romantic about the stars...

awww! so cute, I love this

P.P Pxxx

this was so fluffy. and perfect. i loved it :D sjfsfafasdfsgd

Short, simple, to the point, and adorable.

I loved it.

This. Is. Amazing.

So romantic and poetic and wonderful, perfectly sweet without drowning the reader in a mass pile of fluff.

I do like super-sweet cotton candy oneshots sometimes, but this is... beautiful! :)

Wow, I sound like a pile of mush now. xD anyways, super awesome job! :D

awww so cute!

Aw! This really is beautiful! I love it!

The descriptions of the sky, stars and the moon at the beginning were really well written!

I really enjoyed reading this! Thank you for writing it!

That was a beautifully rounded peace, you showed true depth through your use of carefully selected symbolism and metaphor.

You kept both characters true to themselves, but also showed your personal artistic flare and license.

I really enjoyed this - you have some talent! _

That was so atmospheric. So were they already together? I don't think so, but a bit more emphasis on the beauty of discovering the depths of their feelings for one another would be nice. I liked the way you linked the moon and the stars and Sirius and werewolves together.

True

i'm smiling and "awwing" right now! really cute!

And good use of metaphors!

Was Remus laying down or sitting up during this scene? It might seem like a small detail, but it honestly threw me off the entire time. You described Sirius sitting and laying and it was difficult to get a mental picture because I didn't know if they were BOTH sitting or laying, or who was looking down at who while they spoke.

Don't misunderstand, everything else about the story was done well. It was very sweet. But not knowing that missing detail prevented me from enjoyig it because I couldn't settle on an image the whole time that I was reading.

amazing story... i loved the way you wrote it.

I really enjoyed this story. The imagery was particularly vivid and well placed.

Very well done!

Aw, that was so adorable! I loved it.