I know that you probably don't read these anymore but i am pretty much obligated to say something.
JUST ROCK DA HELL I'VE NEVER READ SOMETHINFG SO GOOD JESUS CRIST I WANNA CRY AND IDE AND GET RESSURECTED TO READ THIS FOR THE FIRST TIME INCREDIBLE ITS JUST WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWSOME!

So...I wanted to say...that...I LOVE YOU.

...I mean as a writer...who's a human being and writes these stories as a human being if you get it...I LOVE YOU.

Now i am going to write a fanfiction about you.

BYE

I have never read that particular Twain story, but now I will. Your version, nonetheless, was very well presented. I was still moved by the last line, even though I had already known about it from reading the reviews. Nicely done.

For the record, I had never even heard of this book before reading this story a few years ago. Since then I've made my family read the book, and they in turn have prosletyzed to their friends about it. To date, I can confirm that you are pretty much responsible for introducing at least twenty people I know to what I now believe to be Twain's greatest work.

Just thought you'd like to know.
-John

Not bad.

After a year way, I decided to return to reading KP fanfics. This is one reason that I'm glad that I did.

I read this story a while back, and it is solely responsible for me finding Twain's story and introducing it to my family. This is a brilliant adaptation of an already brilliant story, and I love it.

-John

lovely story my friend. really dug the ending. I keep trying to place the voice of the snake in my head... oh well, I greed this story.

I like your version of the story. Instead of saying that it was the woman's fault that humanity has lost paradise, it is saying humanity was bound to lose paradise sooner or later because humans are unique compared to animals.

And also that Ron(Adam) did not lose paradise but gave it up, so that way Kim(Eve)would not remain alone in the wasteland. Basically he gave up paradise for love. I like that twist.

Great job.

I love the story, and especially how you managed to capture the essential character of Ron and Kim in their roles as Adam and Eve. You did make one confusing mistake in the last chapter with Cain and Abel, though, when you wrote that Kim was "clinging at Cain’s body" when it was Abel who was murdered.

-John

I've finally just read this entire story. Very good...

Yeah, it was a re-telling, but it was masterful.

I have my own opinions about creation which I will keep to myself, but I will say that this story WAS enjoyable. Makes a person think...

Anyways, just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed this...

Wonderful.

How delightfully different. ) I enjoyed it much. Well done. And yes, that last line was definitely worth it.

-Jawelik

Thank you.I mean sense the begin to the end this story has never stop being chapter was a refreshing remake of famous story.

I was wondering if you where going do Cain and Abel part.I wasn't sure at first if it was going make the story too you pull it off.I'm glade you skip the part where their kids found something no body want's to think about.

My favorite three parts to this ending chapter where;When they invented marriage,Ron trying to see if Cain was a fish and Kim saying part had me little emotional.

It's sad the story come to it's I can always reread from the begin when I want too.

“Wherever she was, there was Eden.”

I can’t do better than that, won’t try. Very well conceived and job.

Just what you’d expect from Kim and Ron at the end of their days.

Great job on the finished product I have to admit this was a good one. Had a lot goin on in this one humor, drama, romance, even a little action. I think it's a common thing though like most people take a long trip to setup a joke. Sometimes it's worth the trip this one was definately worth it. As I've said before you do good work my friend and this is definately part of it. Congrats on another completion looking forward to the next one.