Reviews for Suspicious Behaviour
Guest chapter 1 . 1/3/2015
Oh my god when you said a food-O-phile I was imagining pedobear but as a giant pancake covered in syrup
Estrid Statatic chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
I've HAD someone one like Link follow me around...EVERYWHERE. In the bathroom, in class, in hallways, even halfway to my house, that is until I put him in the hospital(exaggeration!), I kick balls though...Anyway, great story! So is this part; "He's keeping me away from - Lenalee - my friends. No, I meant he's keeping me away from my friends - LENALEE." kind of like Sanji's "I want to use it to benefit humanity,-GIRLS BATH-!" scene? On a lighter(and less perverted)note...story was laughably funny; and also, portrayed a girl's strength to get what she wants. LOVE IT! Keep writing forever! Always treasure your skill!
Noah Gabriel chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
Nice punch, Lenalee~ XD Good story, Dem!
Weaver Chance chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
"Classified as Suspicious Events: This Inspector is likely to be assaulted by random individuals causing momentary blackouts whenever Subject and Miss Lee meet, there appears to be no pattern to who is enacting this assault.

Request Immediate Tranfer."

Haha!

I liked this little story of yours, particularly Lenalee's punch(I think Allen liked that bit too) It caused me to think of the above report as I feel Lenalee is inclined to convince people(even her brother) to in some way facilitate more of Allen's kisses.

One such image was of a grumpy Kanda striking Link from behind then storming off to escape anything that might happen(not that he'd admit that that was why).

Keep up the Great Work!
Coryx chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
YAY FOR ALLENxLENALEE FLUFF! :D

Epic win and fluff and cuteness. Andstuffyeah.
Tossino chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
Late review here~~

Have I mentioned how much I love your Lenalee before? That punch was just so EPIC and so LENALEE. I thought I was gonna die! XD She really has moments like that, and I love that you brought it up in this.

Link was adorable. Seriously. Food-o-phile? x''D You really wrote him in a great way and you should include him in more of your fictions. He was just as bitter and as sarcastic - or maybe its denseness or something in some cases? - and as stalkerish as he is in the manga and he was just... perfect.

And Allen, lol. Gotta love his irritation here. xP It really fits. I think I'd crack if someone kept following me around like Link does to him. His emotions around it felt so real. It was somewhat sad to read that the others were keeping their distance from him, though it makes sense, so... : D Not gonna complain~~

And the ending scene. YAY! It was so cute and so Allen and Lenalee that I almost squealed and I DID melt. They're both too shy for their own good, seriously.

This is an awesome fic. Goes straight to my favourites. Great work, Love.
yuki chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
aw how cute!

haha i love how link's completely clueless!

allenxlenalee all the way!
Na-chan1 chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
Anything in relation with Link is fun. LOL. Poor Allen, he needs a break. At least he has something to look forward to now. XD

Thankyou for this. I really enjoyed it. :D
HikamiTZ chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
At first, I was just so happy someone was writing a fic with Link in it, even if he wasn't the focus and was just there to piss people off. lol damnit he was starting to make me mad toward the end there too, honestly

BUT THEN THE PUNCH

ROFLCOPTER
Fibonacci to Infinity chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
Wow, go Lenalee! You never want to get on a woman's bad side. Cute story, it deserves a lot of credit for being a great Allena fic.
Cats for Science chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
Incredibly, amazingly perfect. :D

You write Link in such an amusing way! I love reading about his character both in the most serious and most crackish ways, and this was definitely perfect for the latter. He's just asking to be viewed as a stalker! And I can totally see Allen having those same problems... you wrote him, Lenalee, and those problems in such an accurate way. And the ending...! It was just the perfect amount of fluff and romance, I think! Not too much, but enough to be a good resolution to Allen's earlier worries.

I know I said that, but I'm obviously not opposed to any Lavi/Kanda. :P I think I said it just because I didn't want a fic based on that (knowing me and all...). You could've added more! :3 Those interactions made me giggle! (Although I STILL don't understand what spot Lavi is referring to... or rather, I have my suspicions, but... ahaha... ;; Like Allen, huh.)

REALLY REALLY GREAT FIC DEMENTIA D