I like this story. The cliffhanger is killing me. Please update soon!

That was so sweet and sad at the same time. I had tears in me eyes.

Oh update soon!

how is this keeping the charactrs realistic? that would NEVER happen..

I love this story! It is very well written!

This fanfiction was great! And yes, you did make the characters relistic! Poor, poor, Edward.. he had a dark past that has been haunting him.. :( But Bella will help him get better :D And good job

I liked seeing emotional, brooding, angsty, Edward, but I didnt really like the sory much. I never thought of Edward even having a relationship before Bella, seeing him as a little innocent, moody, temper-problems, hot, boy. Hee hee...

But yes, I guess I liked it. I like seeing daddy Edward when hes being with Renesmee though...:D

xoxo-EmotionallyConfuzzled

This is a good story but isn't Edward supposed to be like, a gentleman?

Still. This is sad. I very nearly cried ;(

Ah! You're making me cry! :( :)

I loved it! It was so sad!

Wow. This story was amazing. I always love reading tragic stories and this has to be one of my favorites so far. I really like how you were able to delve into Edwards past before Bella and create such a unique and heartfelt story that was so emotional and powerful. One of my favorite lines was when Edward was talking about "puppy love". That made me smile. Well done! I will look forward to reading your other stories :)

This is a good story, You've written it really well. To be honest though, it wouldn't really work as more than a one-shot. But you did good!

i loved it. that's all i can say. it was bittersweet and amazingly sad. thats what made it such a good story. it was great.

i want too see more of the story cuz its awsome i first i thought oh crap edwards got some great times how ever many grandkid out there but then boom completly differnt so please write more

wow...you nearly put in in tears this is one of the saddest stories i have ever read... but it was really good. you did a wonderful job!

signed

The Lady of misfortune

Well, I think the premise of Edward clinging to one tragic memory is a pretty good start. I do enjoy angsty Edward.

You might want to break Edward's confession into smaller paragraphs- it's really easy to get lost in the big block of text.

Edward having a love child at 15? That particular plot bunny doesn't really float my boat so to speak, since it's pretty ooc, but you sold your story fairly well:)