Awwww, so sweet!

It is a beautiful story!

Beautifully written. I only found two grammar-nazi things to poke at: "rehearse" was spelled incorrectly at one point, as was "definitely".

But otherwise... flawless :D

I really really really liked this. That episode was so slashy.

Overgrown jackrabbit, huh? I like it. Not just the name, the whole thing.

There is so much that is beautiful, awesome, sweet, funny, and HOT in this story that I don't know where to begin. I believe I shall simply say this: well done, well done indeed.

Nicely written. Bones really made me mad in that episode so it's nice to read a good justification of his cruelty. Thanks for sharing. )

I enjoyed the story, especially Bones' internal dialog.

Epically done!

Really good and good written story .

I enjoyed their interaction, and it all made sense this way. Like, even though Bones acted angry all the time, he was always keeping quite close to Spock too, what I found a little strange before...

I am looking forward to more stories from you .

I loved it! Please write more :)

-m.m-

Igiveup,

This is just wonderful. (And I'm so glad that I got to read it in advance!)

I love your take on 'The Tholian Web' and why Bones was so hard on Spock. Bones is just desperate to get a rise out of the Vulcan-to make Spock show some kind of emotion over Jim's death. But, of course, that's not all that's going on, and you bring us right inside McCoy's head.

Now I can enjoy all of 'The Tholian Web' without cringing at the 'angry-Bones' parts!

~Rose