poor kids, let them play with Wheelie for a bit

where is Jazz

Perhaps it would help if the characters 'Ari' and 'Alexis' didn't read like bad Mary-Sues all the time that half the situations here would read with more enjoyment, as it is I skip read a lot of them. The ones where it was brief OCs and mostly regarding the cons or bots alone were the best of the bunch including the thunderstorms chapter in full, crickets was good and baby blues also, in fact all Ironhide and Lennox family ones were.

At least Optimus didn't get stolen.

That's why robots shouldn't have coffee.

It's good Ratchet was nearby.

I'm surprised Starscream's still in one piece.

Poor Ironhide.

That was okay.

Poor Bumblebee.

Great story and even better ending!

Uh oh...

I can just imagine Ari's mother going into motherhen mode and threatening everybody who's harming her baby or makes her sad.

But even if she isn't as overprotective, if the description of her is anything to go by, she's a piece od work to begin with, a female Ratchet/Ironhide human.

And the words "female" "Ironhide/Ratchet" and "human" should be recognized as bad news by all Cybertronians by now XDD

BR

you've got sunny's character really well i think. ari's one of my top 3 oc's on this site.

I just had to respond to this chapter. The mental image of Frenzy being struck by lightning had me laughing for a good 5 minutes. I had to stop reading and gasp for air. Then I read the part about his head being in 'Cade's back seat and had to stop reading again until I could see straight once more.

Great chapter!

*lol* Methinks a prank war has begun. If the Twins think Ari and Jolt have been taught a lesson, they're in for a nasty surprise, I'm thinking.