| Reviews for Defenceless |
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Natsuki D chapter 7 . 6/1/2017 Explosive. Destructive... extremely dangerous ect... Quick question: is there a sequel? Loved the story / ~ |
fireicewriter42 chapter 7 . 4/7/2017 "Explosive." Snort. Very clever. Applause for a job well done. |
Guest chapter 7 . 2/22/2017 The pain of this awesome story just stopping... it felt like that time you found an FANTASTIC series and was hooked only for the season to end saying "to be continued" and you find out it was discontinued. ... yup... |
LittleDragon333 chapter 7 . 8/4/2016 Incredible! I loved it! Well written and amusing while also keeping things interesting and on edge. Thank you for the excellent read! |
juliettacapuleto21 chapter 7 . 12/29/2015 I like it. No, i loved it! But i think the end needed a little more... Dont know exactly what, but something... But i loved it |
goldacharmed chapter 7 . 3/29/2015 This was my first Merlin story and I loved it! I hope you wrote a sequel! |
servant123 chapter 7 . 9/9/2014 I enjoyed this. I think you did a nice job developing a fairly unique plot from a fairly common beginning. I appreciate how you brought elements from the middle of the story back into play at the end; it shows forethought and consideration that don't come together all by themselves. So thank you for taking the time to be deliberate about writing a quality story, I assure you, your readers appreciate it. Thanks again for sharing, and I look forward to reading other stories by you. Keep up the good work :) |
Carri007 chapter 7 . 12/5/2012 I loved the story! Great job :) |
DragonsandInk chapter 7 . 7/15/2012 I loved this :D It was fantastic! I thought that you would reveal Merlin's magic for a minute there, but it's cool that you stuck to the plot that he hasn't been found out ;) And it's WAY cool that Merlin can see those light thingies now too. Heehee, this was really fantastic, Thanks! |
lilgenious chapter 1 . 5/14/2012 This is a good story so far. I see that you are complete and am eagerly going to the next chapter. I love stories like this and cannot wait to see what adventure you put us on as readers. I am rather interested to know about what that bracelet was and whether or not Nimueh had something to do with it. |
madmargie chapter 7 . 5/26/2011 I enjoyed this it was an intriguing idea. |
Black Light Brightness chapter 1 . 1/5/2011 SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! continue please! it's so good _ |
threecankeepasecret chapter 7 . 11/5/2010 Very good story, I really liked Merlin's friendship with Arthur and the way you wrote the characters. |
Rae666 chapter 7 . 9/8/2010 Fantastic story! Loved reading it. |
Rae666 chapter 6 . 9/8/2010 Such a fantastic, edge of your seat chapter! |