I just found this story, and I've blown the entire morning reading it straight through (and I have a long list of work to get done!) I've been riveted.
This is so much fun.

Thank you.

flipside is still waiting

*Stamping my foot loudly* Way to go potty!, serves the
inbred weasel rapist right..*Sinister chuckle* oh weasel, you are so going to get what's coming to you..

Love the story and the direction it's going in. Was this continued elsewhere or was it abandoned?

This started out well enough.
To bad there was. I follow through.

Enjoyed the post final battle where Harry is arrested by the pureblood supremacist bigots right after killing Voldemort and declared a dark lord. The bigots continue their control of the ministry and free the death eaters, arrest Harry supporters and muggleborns. Ronald betrays Hermione and she ends up in the cell next to Harry. Harry power grows and he frees Hermione and Fred and escapes Azkaban along with ghost George and regroup with Luna.

So when will Ronald come to a sticky end along with the rest of the bigots?

Thanks for sharing your story. Please update soon.

Too bad it was abandoned. It had potential!

Had a great story going - too bad it was abandoned.

I do have to wonder why so many write Harry Potter as some sort of angry idiot who is incapable of controling his temper when he had grown up in an enviroment where a burst of temper would be severely punished. There is but one instance in the series of books where he did loose his temper and that was after what I would term severe provocation from a drunken woman who had no idea what she was talking about having never met the people she was belittling. Harry is also not an idiot who is incapable of planning things out, again his back ground would have taught him the value of thinking things through a little, although I do admit that he might have been a little hasty at times. So I can not see him having to rush out and blow something up for an hour before he could control his temper, all over reading something.

I think this chapter was weaker than the first two largely because, whatever its virtues, Harry and George's ghost bantering wasn't really what I was looking for based on the first two chapters.

Also mixing genres often tends to produce weak results, the first two chapters read as hurt/comfort/revenge, this chapter read as snarky adventure.

Also what actually was happening in the scene was rather unclear- if I tried I could probably figure it, but still.

The major issue though is we shifted from dealing with horribly injured Hermione and Fred, to Harry and George's ghost joking with each other about the downsides of not having hormones anymore.

Based on reading this, and seeing your profile I'm fairly sure you are a mature enough writer/ reader to accept this as reasonable constructive criticism.

A thought about how this perhaps could have been done differently, George is a prankster and a joker, so use his instinctive tendency to make jokes to drive home the seriousness of the situation. Either write him as too tense and worried to be joking, and have Harry note that, or better have it be obvious gallows humor.

George and Harry are joking around, but write it so we see this constant undercurrent of serious tension. They are trying to break it up, but not succeeding.

Not a bad concept. It sort of captures the hurt/comfort and revenge and super powerful badass lines. All at once.

And you actually proof read your story. I'm mentioning that because I looked at your profile, and yeah, people who can't be bothered to grammar check are annoying.

Occasionally there are those who excuse themselves as being English as second language, which if you don't have a beta is a valid excuse. I think though an AN should mention it at the front of the first chapter.

amusing story

this is the fist harry potter fanfiction i have read and i was pleasnlty surprized at how interesting this type of genre has become to me because of your story. there were some name errors but that was about it. some times it would say forge instead of george or it would say gred instead of fred. thats it though.

Awsome:))

luna is awesome, plain and simpel:D

wonder how she excaped the ministery, but then again, they are the meaning of incompitence. so finding something like a magical printing press would problerly take decades, and if she hid it much longer.

also, if its inside her trunk, and she keeps moving around. noone is going to find her, ever.

a seer wrighting a newspaper, knows most of the facts before they happen, and can fill out the rest as they happen:D

hopeing for more chapters of this sooner or later.