Yeah...update IN 2 YEARS,REALLY and persinality trates are slitly wrong and right cuz red herrasise yellow more and black isnt a maniac but is close to yellow and yellow is more of in inciddent pron than a sisy and trying to do better and green is 90% acurite koopa bros real ages:yellow:13 black:14 green:14 red:15 im not tellin the website with the ages but hint hint...its a nintendo site...try to find it

Yeah...update IN 2 YEARS,REALLY

These sub-chapters keep getting better and better! Red is being a dick to poor yellow as always, Green's just annoyed, and Black is going after Green at the end rather than Red too! Man this was a good one!

Oh damn! This is the most insane and twisted I've ever seen Black! The flash back was hilarious and I just love how everything comes down to the Shadow Queen.

Fun chapter, and I'm glad you're doing more of this awesome story!

*wafts in scent of new chapters* Ah, it's like a refreshing Dew at the end of a long school day! *is refreshed*

Wow, these stories are pretty intense. Me does enjoy them though, they remind me of my own Paper Cross.

I wish I had more to say! Perhaps more SubChapters come soon, yes? Yeeeees? Yes.

Ciao! -DP

LOL! Red is so full of fail in this chapter! He got owned by Green in Wii Sports and blames the Wiimote!

I can only imagine what'll happen next, maybe like Yellow getting sugar hugh?

Wow dude that was COMPLETELY AND INFINITELY RANDOM! *shot for new catch*

Oh well, it's nice to see you back! Cannae wait for SubChappie 2! *shot for abbreviation*

CIAO! -DP

Lol! I love the Koopa Bros! The way you portray them is just hysterical! Red's an asshole, Black's a dumbass, Yellow's a crybaby, and Green's just smarter than any of them.

I'd love to see this continue man!

HA HA! Yellow peed his shell!

I think it's amazing how stupid the Koopa Bros. are.

Wow. red really is in love with money, isn't he? :P And I liked how you portrayed Green and Yellow. It was hilarious, yet sympathizing. Anyway, great job! Now to the next chapter...

Heh,this is downright funny so update.