Oh, Rodney! Poor thing. Although, I feel more sorry for Sheppard doing his best to play nice and not to just bolt from the room like his gut tells him.

Quick I need to get sick so Sheppard can nursemaid me too!

Love the snarky banter between McKay and Sheppard

Brilliant story. It was written I really love your sense of humour. The humourous lines you wrote were amazing. You also have a knack for keeping everyone in character. _

There are one or two extra words here or there,
E.g.
*'but little Jiminy was still whispering in his ear.' - 'but with little', or without the 'was'
*"Thanks," Rodney muttered, opting to drape the it over his face' - 'the cloth', or 'drape it'
I didn't understand the phrase '-sans boots-'. I assume it means 'minus boots', or is Sans a brand of sock? Ah well.

Overall though, fantastic work. D

Cute! Did John take lessons in Bedside 101 from Elizabeth? I have to say though, you captured the snark fest of the two perfectly. At that point, neither had become more open.

I like this - spikey fluff! It rather nicely aviods going into "Clean up on aisle 3" territory while dealing with the emotions of two men who would probably prefer being shot to discussing them.

this is so perfect John and Rodney. There was a big grin in my fayce as I read it...and I hope, you can understand me...english reading is OK, but writing...;;

I love your stories! Your take on characters are so interesting!

This fic was so much fun to read. The pattern of their banter was PERFECT!

Excellent job! Thanks so much!

Awesome! It's good! It shows the beginnings of Rodney's and John's friendship. Great job!

I loved it. I also liked the little reference you made to The Game. Subtle but nice.

I don't suppose you take story requests? Because writing an add-on to the episode "Harmony" where Harmony attempts to get Dr. McKay to marry her might be amusing. It was a Sheppard and McKay episode, which is basically your writing style. Don't get me wrong, it's a very good writing style. Hence why I offer this idea.

Sweet story! I really like how you captured John's personality

Loved this! (And I'm *glad* you can't write unrepentant fluff. This is much better)

Oh, too bad Carson didn't have Ford's videocamera at that very moment! The blackmail potential would have been huge!

This was a wonderfully cute story; thank you for it. (However, I read the blurb too quickly and thought it said, "John Sheppard wipes no one's butt but his own," so in addition to almost dying from the cuteness, I almost snorted my coffee.) :-)

Aw! That was such a good story.

Great Shep and Rodney banter! I loved how Sheppard was unwilling to admit his real reason for being there. And the shoes on the bed thing was funny too!