| Reviews for The Last |
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   Anonymous Girl Gamer chapter 1 . 8/19/2017 It was happy, yet sad. I sometimes wonder myself if Mario actually LIKES fighting Bowser. |
| Charles Galaxysphere chapter 1 . 11/25/2014 sadly beautiful |
| Little Christian chapter 1 . 7/20/2013 Very nice, and sad. :) |
| Ivo-goji chapter 1 . 7/22/2009 That was wonderful! Spectacular! A! I loved it! A fitting end to two great warriors! Did you name Mario's son Antonio because it rymed with Mario? If so you are a genious! That exacatlly how his name would work! |
| BioDragon chapter 1 . 9/24/2008 Sad but at the same time very inspiring. |
| Dragon Lord Coker chapter 1 . 6/19/2008 nicely done your probably absolutely right to |
| Taxima chapter 1 . 6/17/2008 All great legends must come to an end. And this is just how it should be. The rivalry of Bowser and Mari, died by each other's hands. Right now I keep trying to imagine how they look aged, I can see a few spikes and a horn missing from Bowser. Any who, beautiful. |
| The-3-Sueslayers chapter 1 . 6/14/2008 Oh gods... I'm gonna cry. -sniff- |
| Ri2 chapter 1 . 6/13/2008 This is indeed a good way for them to die... So, I guess they tied? |
| Walkazo chapter 1 . 6/13/2008 Very good. Though I can't see Bowser explicitly telling Junior he "loved" him (nor discussing it with Mario afterward). But, the idea that as long as the kids know their parents love 'em nothing else needs to be said is a nice one, and I like your theory about Bowser's regenerativve magic. One thing though, it's a bit confusing when one character's lines span multiple paragraphs: usally it's one paragraph per quote. Anyway, as I said before, this is a good story, and I look foreward to reading more of your stuff. |
| Tekunin chapter 1 . 6/13/2008 A very touching possible ending to the Super Mario series. There is still much of this one-shot left open for the reader to make up their own guesses. Great job dude. |
| nalagaOcean777 chapter 1 . 6/12/2008 Well, here I am checking your latest update of Smash Mind. You mention this fic, I take a look, and the end has me smiling. Pretty awesome, I must say. That does indeed seem a fitting way for both of them to want to go. It'll be a loss to everyone, of course...but things like that happen eventually to every hero. This scene is just one example. An interesting oneshot, definitely worth taking time for. You ought to be getting more reviews for this, seriously. :/ Readers around here get to be so awefully fickle these days...oh well. A fav will suffice, to say the least. :D |
