This was a fantastic story! So well developed and fully thoughtout. its fantastic. I do feverishly hope and be selfish enough to hope that you could continue it. Great work

hurry plz I want to know wat happens

Do you think you ever could get it up? Please?

Oh oh ohhh! Please do continue this! I love it! Poor Cadvan ;'( Poor Maerad :'( and Camphis and Kelia :'( 3

why arn't they together yet

i think that m and c should kiss (not during the current fight though cuz that would start more problems) and m doesn't have sad memeries

do you like it ?

i didn't think so :(

i sense a big moment coming up... do i want to wait for it...? nope. so please, please, please, hurry and update! loving it, just the right amount of hurt feelings and confusion! ;)

AUGH! Now really, people. That has got to be the absolute WORST place to leave a story. The main character's friend and former lover has just DIED, the city is being attacked by EVIL FORCES, and we still don't know what Cadvan wrote in that darned letter! Augh! I'm just a little pissed right now. Don't worry about it. Much. I do realize that it's been over two years since this was last updated, but I'd really, really appreciate it if you'd bring it back from the dead. Seriously. I'm absolutely positive this is the worst place to leave a story. *See above reasons. Anyways... *grin* This is a freakin' awesome story, the end is just missing. Like missing in action, but like, not dead yet? (I hope.) Soooo, post the next chapter, yeah? Hugs and cookies, ~E

Please update! Have you given up on this story? The last time you updated was over two years ago! Please write! I love this story!

Hey, I know you haven't updated in more than a year, but could you please write some more? That cliffie is not very...satisfying. If it wouldn't be too much trouble...more?

Okay, first of all, I'm going to kill you for having Cadvan be engaged to Neri. I never liked her. *scowl*

Secondly, your writing is gorgeous.

Thirdly, Enkir is a wonderful evil villain..."their heads are en route.." so funny! So evil!

Fourthly, the exploration of the faces was a brilliant idea.

Fifthly, I apologize for being behind the fold, but you deserve the praise :)

i really love this...

Plz PLEASE put another up! I swear I am dying very painfully right now!

omg...dead...omg...

k, i really dont think that these tears will ever stop. that was just so...omg

"I will avenge my love,” she and Kelia whispered as one, and their smiles, for one moment, were bright, and there was in that dark room, a fleeting glimpse of hope. - that was...beautiful. this story is beautiful! everything about it is beautiful...and tragic...this war is...omg

and omg, that part with cadvan and nerili, that was...omg...k, seriously, i think that's the only word that's gonna come from my mouth: omg

seriously, this was... tragic, breathtakingly beautiful and ...just beautiful.

please update soon!

ur no. 1 biggest fan - who will piss u off soo much if u dont update!

~me~

OMG!

K, i woudve reviewed this last night but my mum came in and demanded i get off so i couldnt even finish the chapter - i was up to when nerili interrupted their almost-kiss- and i was like: WHAT! NO! seriously, its been killing me today at school. i seriously couldnt wait to get home and read this! lol, and OMG...the hand thing...at the beginning was...beautiful. and omg! i hate nerili AGAIN!HOW COULD SHE DO THAT? JUST SHOW THAT RING TO PROVE HER POINT TO MAERAD! THAT WAS JUST SOO CRUEL! AND HEARTLESS! GOD, I HATE HER! and ESPECIALLY since she interrupted before they kissed! i wanted to strangle her there!

and then, when maerad was saying all that to cadvan! that was...man, i was soo close to crying! i mean come on dude! that speechy thing was soo...sad! and HAHA! loved how cadvan fully dissed that, saying u know nothing about me then maerad, and all that. lol. and omg, i hate enkir! still! man, i hope this bloody war ends well. (for the light ne dah! lol)

anywayz, UPDATE!

~me~

yepee! yepee yepee YEPEE! :D:D:D:D

CAMPHIS BROKE UP WITH MAERAD! FINALLY! AND NERI'S LET GO NOW (what a sweet girl lol) AND BETTA THEN ALL OTHERS IS THAT: MAERAD CAME TO SEE HIM! HAHAHAHAHA! :D:D:D:D:D i am SO HAPPY :D:D:D:D:D:D! :D hehe!

yayayayay! udpate soon! :D

lol, loved the last line :P

~me~