Full of so many unusual ideas (like Esme, and your inspiration from Cyteen) and a ton of promise for the developing plot. There are so many interesting turns and characters. I'd love to know what Hermione came up with to help Esme move more easily. Alas, if you haven't updated in nineteen years I can't assume you'll be coming back to it.

Kindly please update! Please and thank you! _

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it is almost 2 in the morning and my autocorrect is perpetually unreliable, so sorry for the mess, but this was an excellent start. very on board with your portrayal of snape, as for hermione... I'm a bit confused how old she is. did i miss a date at the beginning perhaps? anyway, the dynamic is already interesting and I am eager for more.

Oh my...what a beautifully written chapter. This is the Snape I know and love! You portrayed him perfectly (in my opinion) cannot wait to read the rest of your story!

Certainly an interesting start!

It would’ve be nice to see this play out.

This is probably a really good story, but Snape repeatedly calling Hermione a child after he touched her naughty bits is squick-worthy. I'm out.

Awwww man, it's bloody heartbreaking that the story ended here! It was PHENOMENAL! Gosh, to think it's been untouched for over 16 years. Does anyone know what happened to the author? Has she remained in oblivion all this time...? :(

Your story is captivating! I love the depth of characters. I know it's a long shot, but it would be amazing if you would consider continuing this story.
Thanks, Pixie

Update? Like the story a lot. I want Snanger (is that right?).

Uhh... Blaise Zabini is a guy, not a girl. Just sayin'.

Why why did it end here :(

This is an AWESOME story! I think I am in love with your writing! You have excellent characterization; your characters seem so real when they interact! Your descriptive skills are no slouch either; you put me right in the story as if I were really there so that I watched the story unfold as if we're watching a movie. It was quite an interesting experience! Loved this story! Thanks for writing it and I would love to see if continued! I have "followed" it just in case you do write more, just like I have " followed" you as a writer for the same reason and "favorited" you as a writer. I really do like the way you write! I "favorited" the story also. Thanks for writing!