Thanks for writing this awesome story. I always love David and John stories. It is one relationship that was never explored in the show and I wish it had been.

This is an amazing story. The way you have the mix of action and personal relationships and it's all convincing and balanced. And it all flows well in a way that you don't notice until you read something that doesn't flow. The more I write the more I respect other authors. You're amazing.

"I don't understand." How could they have brought him here without revealing its secret?
"McKay means you don't have to be conscious to give blood," Ronon said.

LOL - This was great when David realizes how things could have gone.

Sheppard brothers to the rescue! I enjoyed every bit of the awkwardness, and seeing the growth of the relationship, Dave's dawning understanding of who John is, etc. I particularly enjoyed the golfing session where they had a chance to talk.

Yet another wonderful story. Thank you!

I think at this point I was willing to hunt down John's brother and drag him to Pegasus myself :)

Absolutely loved it! So good!

This was a wonderful story so much fun to read about Dave and John and their relationship with each other.

I loved this story! It was interesting to see things from David’s POV.

Incredibly well done! And the dialogue was fantastic!

I enjoyed your story very much. Thanks for sharing you time and imagination :)

Great story...glad I didn't have to wait for the installments...read cover to cover...loved the characterization, it would have been a good follow-up for the funeral episode/replicator...it ended too soon...too much left unsaid.

I really enjoyed this. Great job with the characters.

Beautifully written story! Thank you!

An amazing story! I was glued to my phone for hours...seriously amazing! Thank you!

Genius way of both getting David to Atlantis and writing his character. I think you did a great job with him, really spot on to what we know of his character. I also think you wrote the action scenes really well; I was definitely on the edge of my seat during the entire battle with the wraith hive! Thank you for writing this story.

Hello, loved this family reunion story. Siblings can be so different that understanding is very difficult, yet with similarities only outsiders seem to see. Good job. Well worth the time to read. Thanks Sasha £££