Lol, I love that in the end the one doing the claming was our chokoboy

Very much enjoyed reading this, thank you for sharing!

I wish you can leave 'kudo's like on AO3, but good work! :)

Awesome and far too short! Id love to see the two of them tease Cloud like that and seeing the blond kick some serious ass in anger. By the way: I love the way you wrote this! Nice going, buddy!

I wish there was a like button on here that I could press

Ohohoho Cloud is soo cute here! XD and holy Gaia the scene is hot as hell too! That should be what threesome like! Followed by DP, and Cloud wouldn't be able to walk for the next two days, I bet...LOL

hearts. /dies

Ah, I could so see this happening. Its funny and cute. Plus, Zack just makes everything better with his quirky attitude.

A really nice story.
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Both hilarious and hot and a honor to read xD

Keep 'em coming! :3

~flails~ omg i so want to be in that room while this is happening! 0o0

Have I mentioned I love this story? This was my second time reading it,a nd I'm sure I'll keep coming back to it... Just for the laughter! The best part is the very last few paragraphs... Ah... *sighs dreamily*

Hope to see more of your work!

great one-shot :3

I loved the ending! You go kill someone Cloud! And make sure to enjoy it!

aw, i loved how at the end cloud just blows up and just kisses zack and straddles sephiroth. it was hilarious how cloud mentions a "some stupid primitvie need to stake your claim"! haha, its cute and fun reading, thanks!QQ