Nicely done

I ... LOVED... THIS! I looked it up because of an awesome story "darkness becomes you" suggested it and I was not disappointed! This was incredible! It was so well thought out and amazing in every aspect of itself! Great job!

This was a marvellous fic, filled with amazing feels inducing interactions, in character dialogue, a great sense of tone and fantastic framing for the scenes and time-skips, as well as conveying Jade and the rest of the casts feelings of alienation or normalcy, kudos!

Very well written, very well planed. An excellent piece of work.

The characters were dead on from the show, I really liked Uncle (of course) and Jackie and Jade's conversations were the highlights. Making most of the story dialogue was a nice touch and the third-person viewpoint is also one of my favorite writing tools. The "Here's the thing" segments were great introductions; the whole thing was easily one of, if not the best JCA fics I've read. Just made of win the whole way through.

You rock. That's all there really is to say. I smiled a lot while reading this. There was probably this creepy look on my face the entire time I was reading the story... Yeah, anywayz, I could imagine everyone's voice as I read along and I've gotta say that you nailed the characters on the head. Rock on!

oh my god. WHY did u do that?

That was awesome! the suspense, the drama, the ACTION! You should totally make a sequel!

This? Is teh LOVE.

-SS

nice

Awesome. Just - awesome. :3

This was a splendid story (with the very very minor exceptions of the two issues Mireia already mentioned in her review), and I really enjoyed it. We need more fics like this. Ones that just make you feel good when you get to the end. I can't get rid of this warm, fuzzy feeling which has taken up residence somewhere in my mid-section, and the pleasant smile simply refuses to leave.

Oh, and you said you were taking suggestions for an alternate title, right? How's "Here's the Thing" sound? I think it fits, personally. XD

You know, I'm kind of surprised no one else really writes about this plot point. It's certainly full of potential for great stories, much like this one. This seems like a very realistic way that everyone would deal with Jade special destiny. You've certainly got the characters down pat.

(Just a couple of things. Jade's toy's name is Super Moose (although he might've been called Mighty Moose in the earlier seasons. Been a while since I've seen the early episodes.) The talismans were also banished to the Netherworld with Shendu at the end of the series. But if this fic is AU, then that doesn't matter much.)

I enjoyed this. My favourite part was Jackie telling Viper it was Tohru's fault.

Very Cool. Yes, they both need capital letters. Is there going to be anymore on this Ben Shui stuff? Looks very cool.

Keep writing!

I love this.

Can you make a sequel in which after her training and she meets up with the demons?