| Reviews for Unraveling |
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x Euphoria chapter 1 . 5/21/2013 This was realllllly good. You are right too, they were good friends and I feel a lot of people forget that. You did a great job] |
Bulletprccf chapter 1 . 6/3/2012 I really liked how you used the cloak, as it actually IS a metaphor. [I watched an interview with the director of FFVII] It's supposed to represent a heavy weight on his shoulders, like guilt or death. The unravelling may very well be canon as well. :] |
JessicaJ chapter 1 . 3/22/2009 I was going to comment on how much i liked the last line, then you BLEW YOUR OWN TRUMPET! But yes, I liked it. Simple, but it worked. |
misikoblossom chapter 1 . 7/6/2008 Wow, I really liked this. I'm sure most of the other reviewers have said this for you already: this is beautiful, touching. So there's something else I'd like to say: You know, during Vincent's speech (I don't know whether you did this on purpose or not) but...a lot of what he said could have been applied to Lucrecia as well. I like how you used the ambiguous "she" rather than "Aeris" there. Just wanted to point that out. If you did that on purpose, I commend you. Well done. |
Squeeze-the-Fish chapter 1 . 5/1/2008 You’re right; this was a little cliché at some places, but still a good read. |
IVIaedhros chapter 1 . 3/7/2008 The eye effect is rather cliche, but I enjoyed the sap and I loved the last line. Thanks for the read. |
Illusion of the Mirror chapter 1 . 2/6/2008 This was actually very good. You've managed to communicate Tifa's feelings without making her seem weak or needy. I hope that you write more soon. I like your style. |
mystic-Hoshi chapter 1 . 2/1/2008 very well done! yeah Tifa and Aeris were good friends. D i also like the last line hehe. xD |
Tincent chapter 1 . 1/31/2008 This took my totally by surprise when I found it nestled deep in my inbox when I intended to delete everything with two clicks. Then I read that it was VincentXTifa and my heart skiped a beat. How long has it been since I've read a wonderful piece such as this? So long that I can't even recall. I suppose it's why I'm spamming right now going on and on about how thankful I am to you at this exact moment. If you ever do feel like taking on another VinTif, I'll gladly show my support and review as soon as I could possibly. Thank you a thosand and one times over for this. I enjoyed it tremendously :) |
Lotuss Tears chapter 1 . 1/31/2008 Hey that was good stuff ] It was short but it was one of those pieces that conveyed enough so that if it had been any longer it would have been ruined, in other words... Just the right amount of everything! |
Erse chapter 1 . 1/31/2008 Ah, I read this on Lunaescence, so you already know what I think about it. It's quite a lovely little one-shot; great characterizations, great writing style. |
TifaValentine99 chapter 1 . 1/20/2008 *tilts head* why else would he wear it? |
The Tiramisu Of Impending Doom chapter 1 . 1/8/2008 You know what, that is a damn sweet story. I really love that last line. It's like you wrapped up a present and topped it off with a pretty bow, and I could just picture her trying to fix his cloak. I wonder if he'd let her. Or maybe she'd buy him a new one on eBay or something. I like how you wrote him, silent but present, and how the first time he spoke he tossed his fortune cookie lines at her. Funny, how he ends up lifting her spirits, isn't it? Things aren't always what they seem. I also like that you have Aeris and Tifa as friends. I think I've seen more people writing them that way, but a lot of times people like to bash one or the other, and that's not fair. Anyhoodle, many thanks for sharing. I enjoyed this very much! |
MysticSpiritus chapter 1 . 1/8/2008 Very cute and "aw" worthy. Mystic |
Summoner Luna chapter 1 . 1/8/2008 I love you so much for writing this...because you're just so right. Tifa was torn up when Aerith died, and I hate that the fandom has somehow decided to just ignore that and focus on Cloud's angst and how Tifa does nothing but cry over *him.* /rant. :D But really, this is very lovely...I love the idea of Vincent offering her comfort in this time as well...I'm a CloudxTifa girl at heart, but I still love the dynamic she has with Vincent, and I think you have portrayed it beautifully...your characterizations are just perfect. :) |