| Reviews for Betrayal |
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Emoeverafter chapter 21 . 12/29/2008 hey! your story rocks and i can't wait to read the sequal! -Brittany aka Emoeverafter aka blood on tyhe knife of happy aka twistedtwilightride |
Dahlia-ailhaD chapter 3 . 9/12/2008 Awesome, I love Esme's character. Lol at Edward getting to cop a feel. Can't wait for the next one. |
SukiRin chapter 21 . 7/9/2008 good story...bella the ultimate vampire? wow! heading off to the sequel! |
TopazEyesx77 chapter 21 . 4/5/2008 hey i loved it so so much it was so awesome but i dont really understand what bella really eats plz rite back and tell me and i'm going to be reading your next story thanx for writing these stories:):) /)/) ('.') (") (") i know its a wierd lookin bunny but bear with me :):) |
greenfishbluefish chapter 10 . 4/3/2008 Okay...so I am only at the end of chapter ten, but i really need to sleep, so i'll finish it tomorrow... I really like this story! It moves quickly through the plot, and is unpredictable (in an interesting great way). I like all of the different POVs too. Just a question: Why is Rosalie nice all of a sudden? I think it's great, but I was wondering if you had a reason. That's all. Hopefully I can keep reading tomorrow... The End! |
I LEFT THE DANGED SITE GEEZ chapter 18 . 3/30/2008 You forgot Seth and Leah! (growl) |
I LEFT THE DANGED SITE GEEZ chapter 3 . 3/30/2008 JACOB I HATE YOU! (GROWL) |
tsukemono-chan chapter 12 . 3/13/2008 I really like this story so far. Bella's always killing Emmett. Poor Emmett. Keep up the great work! - |
Alyssa chapter 21 . 2/28/2008 You have a really good imagination. I just loved your story. I was wondering though... When did it take place? Like after Eclipse or before? I don't know how you can write so much, is it like when you read a good book and you can't set it down? I stayed up all night to read it. How in the world did you come up with the idea for the plot? It was just amazing. I want to see the Twilight movie when it comes out, what about you? I hope that the producers don't do anything to make me regret seeing it. From, Alyssa |
Rosegirl chapter 21 . 2/27/2008 this is so good and i thought that you where awsome to write this. |
disneydork chapter 20 . 2/23/2008 Hehe, that end was CUTE! |
xxtaylorcxx chapter 20 . 2/22/2008 aww i like this story. haha i cant wait til the sequal. |
xxDeath's Daughterxx chapter 20 . 2/22/2008 tear-really this is the last chapter. i'm really sad. oh by the way, WAY TO GIVE ME A HEART ATTACK! i was so scared when you said it was over, but calmed down when you mentioned a sequal. good. love work-continue soon. peace out with love _ ,.., |
ty101 chapter 20 . 2/22/2008 i loved it and there better be a sequal the volturi come bi for now |
MidnyghtVampyrezz chapter 19 . 2/19/2008 love it so please hurry and update soon! |