Reviews for Betrayal
Emoeverafter chapter 21 . 12/29/2008
hey! your story rocks and i can't wait to read the sequal!

-Brittany aka Emoeverafter aka blood on tyhe knife of happy aka twistedtwilightride
Dahlia-ailhaD chapter 3 . 9/12/2008
Awesome, I love Esme's character. Lol at Edward getting to cop a feel. Can't wait for the next one.
SukiRin chapter 21 . 7/9/2008
good story...bella the ultimate vampire? wow! heading off to the sequel!
TopazEyesx77 chapter 21 . 4/5/2008
hey i loved it so so much

it was so awesome

but i dont really understand what bella really eats

plz rite back and tell me

and i'm going to be reading your next story thanx for writing these stories:):) /)/)

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i know its a wierd lookin bunny but bear with me :):)
greenfishbluefish chapter 10 . 4/3/2008
Okay...so I am only at the end of chapter ten, but i really need to sleep, so i'll finish it tomorrow...

I really like this story! It moves quickly through the plot, and is unpredictable (in an interesting great way). I like all of the different POVs too.

Just a question: Why is Rosalie nice all of a sudden? I think it's great, but I was wondering if you had a reason. That's all.

Hopefully I can keep reading tomorrow...

The End!
I LEFT THE DANGED SITE GEEZ chapter 18 . 3/30/2008
You forgot Seth and Leah! (growl)
I LEFT THE DANGED SITE GEEZ chapter 3 . 3/30/2008
JACOB I HATE YOU! (GROWL)
tsukemono-chan chapter 12 . 3/13/2008
I really like this story so far. Bella's always killing Emmett. Poor Emmett. Keep up the great work! -
Alyssa chapter 21 . 2/28/2008
You have a really good imagination. I just loved your story. I was wondering though... When did it take place? Like after Eclipse or before? I don't know how you can write so much, is it like when you read a good book and you can't set it down? I stayed up all night to read it. How in the world did you come up with the idea for the plot? It was just amazing. I want to see the Twilight movie when it comes out, what about you? I hope that the producers don't do anything to make me regret seeing it.

From,

Alyssa
Rosegirl chapter 21 . 2/27/2008
this is so good and i thought that you where awsome to write this.
disneydork chapter 20 . 2/23/2008
Hehe, that end was CUTE!
xxtaylorcxx chapter 20 . 2/22/2008
aww i like this story.

haha i cant wait til the sequal.
xxDeath's Daughterxx chapter 20 . 2/22/2008
tear-really this is the last chapter. i'm really sad. oh by the way, WAY TO GIVE ME A HEART ATTACK! i was so scared when you said it was over, but calmed down when you mentioned a sequal. good. love work-continue soon. peace out with love _ ,..,
ty101 chapter 20 . 2/22/2008
i loved it and there better be a sequal the volturi come bi for now
MidnyghtVampyrezz chapter 19 . 2/19/2008
love it so please hurry and update soon!
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