This is funny. Oh, Howl. Concentrate, won't you? LoL

this is hillarious!

you have their personality in a nutshell

That was cute:)

Man, that made me giggle quite a bit. Nicely done.

wow... that was hysterical. i really enjoyed that one! -faves-

XD That's great! Especially, with everything in parenthesis and Howl's cynical humor. Loved it!

That was hilarious. They're totally in character too.

I love it.

That was adorable!

Sweet and short, and not to mention a pleasure to read.

Hahaha! xD That was hilarious!

I can see that happening in the book, definitely. xD You got both Howl and Sophie in perfect character, too.

After the 'Goodness, he's ugly! Chip of the old block' comment from Howl, I can see him saying all those things about Morgan. xD

Great job!

~Mew Frost~

This is hilarious. You did this in a very original and clever way. Nice job!

I went on your LiveJournal account to read the full version of this, and I love it! I love the little comments Howl and Sophie make, and the things Howl wrote that were crossed out. XD Very nice job! I've never read anything like this before; it's very clever!