I like that "shards of hope".

Ah beautiful. I love the bit with the dandilion.

O I really like this chapter with Ron and Hermione! Good one!

Only a weed... But that weed could kill a flower. Interesting, isn't it? But this was a really good story, I enjoyed it a lot. Good job.

Empty words. That's an odd, complicated thought, isn't it? I like the analogy with the flower, that was good. One thing, though, it's H-e-r-m-i-o-n-e, Hermione, not Hermoine. But good job on this chapter anyway.

I like this story so far! Interesting how Harry thinks time can't heal everything... Well, I suppose not even time can heal everything completely, but it does get better. Good point.

everything flowed together nicely. i like it. definetly deeper than it seems. just try to make it a bit longer next time, okay?

this looks really good. you are very good with putting in detail. i cant wait to read more!

pretty cool - i'll be checking back for more! if you have time and wouldn't mind, would you check my HP story? that would be awesome! Thanks! good job! PvC

That was nice. :)