Awww, this was a really sweet story. I like this NT series. I saw the movies and liked the characters, but I love the depth you've given them, the protectiveness they have for each other and the sweet inner dialogue. I'll be reading more, I'm sure! Thank you!
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I loved this! Great job .

Awesome, awesome story. Good job.

This was spectacular! I love their friendship!

This was brilliant! Riley really is like the sarcastic and goofy younger brother. And haha, at the part where he was complaining about how everyone has a dog named Riley, I LOL'd. Because I have a dog named Riley, and I named it after him.

Absolutely loved it. Can you write a story of when Rick comes back?

oh my goodness!

I can SO see Riley getting distracted by fishies!

you like doing the whole 'Riley runs into criminals while getting burgers' thying don't you?

I love your stories.

:)

Prolly already reviewed this (since it's been one of my favorites since, like, eternity), but just in case I didn't, I just wanna say:

Riley is unbelievably amazing the way you write him and I love it. Ben/Riley friendship is just soooo GUH, kno what I mean? I loved Riley's quips and sarcasm. They made me laugh out loud, no joke. I had to slap my hand over my mouth to keep from waking everybody up. :P

Anyways, all in all, well done. _ I absolutely loved it. I came back to add it to my favorites and rereading it only strengthened my decision, so. :P Thanks for writing thing!

A-1. :D Love it.

please update soon :)

What a wonderful story! I loved it so much!

Thanks for taking me on such an awesome ride!

Haha, this was really cute and entertaining! Great job. You're a very talented author.

XD dude! I LOVE YOU! Gawd you are SUCH a good NT writer. :D

That was so, good! I loved it!

I think what I like best about your style is the tone. There's always hope in your stories. And reason. Some do the unending whump on poor Ri, but you have a rhyme to your reason and it works very well.