Wow.

This was beautiful… I loved your Andromeda, and what you did with them all, though I didn't really agree with some things about Cissy - you handled them all really beautifully, and I loved the parenthesis thing, especially )

god.. im speechless. i love you're style and the plot.

Wow...amazing, like, mindblowingly amazing.

I love it :)

I thought I reviewed this! But I guess not- it is amazingly good, so beautifully written. I.. am really speechless.

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I think I'm going to cry. I can't even say how much I love this, it was so good, so wonderfully written.

I loved it. The format. How sad it was. And the way it was from Andromeda's POV :)

It was nice that you showed how far apart Sirius and Andromeda were, in spite of being favorite relatives. The lack of capitalization was nice. And... the last line was harsh and awesome. Also, I like how Cissy is, and the snippet style.

I adore your stories, and this one was just pitch-perfect and so, so lovely. My favorite line was definitely the bit in parentheses about Bella killing Sirius. Poignant and just a little bit sad. Beautiful.

Well, brilliant sketch of Andromeda here! Well done.

This is wonderful. I've been reading a lot of your fics today and found they have such original touches to them - in this one, I like the complexity of Narcissa and especially the idea that Sirius was named Tonks' godfather, but doesn't remember it when he returns from Azkaban. Very sad but believable.

I really liked this one. Andromeda is really interesting from your perspective!

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Lovely! A different perspective than your run-of-the-mill Blackfic, but handle with grace and diligence so it was very believable and a great read.

I loved the use of parenthesis. It remains almost young, hopeful; the stream of conciousness perfectly punctuates the entire piece. I also love that Cissa and Andromeda maintain their relationship! Seriously, I love that she is the maid of honor and Dora's godmother; it seems very in character after her saving Harry in the end of DH.

My favorite was your interpretation of Sirius' running away, that he would have gone to Andromeda's and that Regulus was ignorant of James - beautiful tidbit I'm really glad you included :)

So, glorious!

Wow. Thats...wow.

I love the thoughts in brackets. they add power to the peice in my opinion