"He was willing to try. Soon everything would probably just fall into place and he'd be Piper's guy." Yay! Rhyme! Nice, good fic! And true, nothing like the music to show real love!

Please continue!

man u should have finished it it would have been good if they bolth new they liked eachother

man i would be all over stork if it were me good story so far :)

I love it! Pleases write more soon!

GAH! What the hell do I love that so much? Stork is supposed to be mine! GRR...

Sorry, I love it is all. I could've sworn I reviewed for this before, but I guess not. Continue please! Pretty please? PLEASE?

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more soon please

AW! This is so cute! (And finally, a Storm Hawks fic that isn't gay.) Update soon, cuz I luv Storkie.

aw! how sweet!

If finn knows this, why is he like the complete opposite? )

I believe it's "Cassanova" not "Cassnova".

Just a quick pointer. hehe!

TTNR

Keep on rockin' the Piper/Stork world.

Wow, I have to say I had my doubts at first. But you did really well on this. This is really entertaining, nice work. Oh man, Stork is so paranoid. He puts conspiracy theroists to shame. hahaha, just joking. Anyway this was pretty good, I'm real impressed the way its turned out and I have to agree with that other person, you really do make it seem like an episode of Storm Hawks. Not too many people can do that. Props dude, keep up the good work.

Green Gallant.

hahahaha. Oh man that was funny. I cant believe the first Storm Hawks fic I read is a Piper/Stork one. But man that was funny. I liked how embarassed he was and how Piper hit him. I can see that happening, that's real funny. Good job on this dude. Its pretty good so far.

Its kind of funny, you have this guy that's like the embodiment of Emo and you have the genius girl. I got nothing against it, I'm more Piper/Aerrow myself, but that's just me. It should be intrestring to see what you come up with. I can tell this is going to be a really funny story. Especially with Finn involved.

Nice, but I still can't picture Stork wearing jeans and a T-shirt. Ah well more please.

I have no idea why...

But I really like the idea of Stork and Piper being together. I get the classic 'weird outcast wins over the smart pretty girl' vibe, and its adorable. And what would normally be one of those super cheesy poorly written cliches, you write it as if it were an actual episode. YAY! Its so adorable.

That merb is awesome, I swear.

This is a gem. I cannot wait to read the third chapter and hopefully peruse more of your work here. Nice to read a good StorkXPiper fic. :D I wrote one of my own, though it's hinted at and not really delved into. I plan on writing more about my OC, Alba, but I'm really not sure what to write as of yet.

Wow! What happens next? I can't wait to see what Finn comes up with in the next chapter!