SUPPPPPPPPPPPEEEEEERRRRRRRRR CUTE I LOVED IT!

Awe~! That was so kawaii! O

Kawaii!

I like it good job :)

Aw! Good for you! He didn't take a bite out of her shoulder or anything! XD

Glad you finally got it finished- Iris-chan and I were contemplating on whether you'd chicken out or not because of your blatant SasuSaku lurve. BUT I KEPT THE FAITH! DATTEBAYO!

Peas out (sushi rocks!),

~Bya-chan

That was an adorable story. And I love how you kept it as a realistic first encounter between two people instead of the usual:

"OMG, I just met you but I'm totally in love with you!1one"

"Like, OMG, me too! Let's make babies!11"

Of course, the car ride with a stranger was a bit of a stretch but you admitted that and addressed the situation. _ It was a very cute story and I enjoyed reading it. KisaSaku is my absolute favorite crack pairing and I think this was a very good, well-written story. Sorry, but you don't fail at crack. :D I'd love for you to continue the story but I know it's a oneshot, so I won't press the issue any further.

Keep up with the excellent writing.

Clever and nicely done.