Wowww! It's Cool! I like it

That was spook cute, there should be a sequel.

Now for some criticism, the kiss on the check seemed a little OC and a little rushed for Ash. But I got to say that you've captured Misty's personality beautifully. GG for that.

:D

It was a really nice story you wrote:)

I haven't reviewed this before? Really? Well, I love it. Really sweet, patient story. Great pacing, great characters, all-in-all charming.

Awesome work :)

lovely story _

Wow! I luv it!

I loved it! So funny!

Yeah, yeah, you're story was kind of nice. Funny how Ash didn't know why he disguised himself. Keep it up

One word: AWW!

great story! your plot is very original. i liked it very much.

Great job!

That sure is what happens!

Hello, this is EVAN AAML. I have to say that this is a great story! I am a avid fisher myself and I can say that this is definetly my favorite sport-based aaml ever! I am greatly impressed. I hope to hear from you again! And keep up the good work, romantic, ( kissing was great ), funny, ( who- bang- do- bang- think- bang- you- bang- are! ), and simply great, ( everything ). Make another one just as great soon!

sincerely,

evan, a fan of aaml -EVAN AAML

this was a great one-shot! by the way, i didn't know dawn has a buizel? this is what happens when you miss out on the episodes.

This was a nice read. A good AAML with a good amount of humor on the side. I really liked the parts where Grotle showed off the "strength of his jaws" LOL. Once again good story.