Well this was interesting some interesting fights now we have the Akatsuki I'm only now remembering why there was that Yuki I think her name was instead of Kisame I forgot he was killed by Tenshi, still this should be interesting so I'm guessing it will be SakuInoChiyo vs Sasori and NaruTensHaku against Daidara the weakling Yamanaka wanabee, should be interesting

Well this was an interesting start to part 2

So the gangs altogether again.

Have you tried to continue?
Has anyone picked up where you left off?

So, I'll get right to it!
I read the first story and just found out that the sequel was abandoned. Now I understand your reason for doing so and I am not angry at this decision. I only have one question though.

(HAS THIS STORY BEEN ADOPTED; I would really enjoy reading it and following it, if it has?)
Can someone please let me know!

If this story is finished with you as an author then you should place it in the complete category and/or place a notice on the summary, that way new readers know what they're getting into (unfinished story and all).

On a reviewer standpoint let me say that I did enjoy both this and its starting story and though I am sad that you'll no longer be writing it I do hope that someone does decide to take up the mantle and bring you compelling story to an adequate close.

It IS rubbish 'cause you concentrated on OC too much. Story could have been much better without him. Main character formally should be naruto, but in your story he is a sidekick of some sort.. You didn't presented his mental situation at all, while the where whole two-three chapters for OC to come other his depresion after losing his eyesight. While you dealt with naruto's first kill with two sentences. Don't say that it's a story about naruto and modificated team 7, when it's a story about your OC, who wasn't even realistic (not only because he was overpowered, but his mental character was contradictory- you said that he was trained as living weapon with no emotions, yet from very first chapter he had all the emotions of normal person). To finish.. Some jounin dealing easilly with two sanins? Come on, why bother then? OC killed all the enemys. The end!

O.o some one needs to revive it if no one has yet. Its a Great story needs to contine you.

chicken

Good story so far :)

Good luck with your studies. Take your time and relax. Write when you feel ready. I will look forward to the day when you start update this story.

Good luck!

I hope you come back your story is really good looking forward to your return

Oh I know what you mean I've been in a slump lately and I felt I was only writing for my friends instead for myself but I think I finally found my muse again. Anyways I hope you'll find your muse for this story. Till then we'll wait for an update. Take your time.

sigh good job as usual I got to say I am a bit disapointed that I wont be able to read this for awhile but still even for those few erros that you did make you often fixxed them in later chapters or just havnt gotten to it yet any way when you do get back to work keep up the good work hope to see the next chapter sometime soon. signed Aiten :P

Hey there,

first I have to say that it somehow sucks to see such a good story unfinished.

Bt I definitely know how you feel. It's pointless to do something without putting your heart into it. It just won't work as well that way. If one tries hard, one could copy the usual style for quite a while, but at some point it'll just not be the same.

Well then, in case you wnon't write anymore, consider this goodbye, otherwise be sure I'll be reading this fanfiction as soon asyou decided to update it.

'Till then

MoD366

I'm not going to be one of the readers who gets angry because u aren't going to finish the story

i completely understand

i just hope that you will continue when you want too

you somewhat inspired to be honest

i just want you to know that your stories were great to read when it lasted

you have a talent when it comes to writing

you have a great imagination

and that's amazing, so farewell i guess

hope to see you writing again, but it seems i can only dream

'sigh' but that can't get me down, i should try uploading my own stories

and hope i will make someone enjoy my stories like i did your

but maybe in a different account, hm maybe;

i hope you read this review, it will be greatly appreciated

once again thank you for the great stories, i love them all.

-Cody