| Reviews for Vanishing Illusions |
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stevem1 chapter 9 . 6/20 This is a great premise, but Fedor (Harry) is a bit too cool for school for me. |
rigger42 chapter 7 . 6/13 I also see Albus as wanting the Death Stick and once he has it he'd consider it the ultimate wand and wouldn't concern himself with the artistry of making anything else. He probably gathers tidbits for judgment like yew is dark and oak is boring... |
rigger42 chapter 1 . 6/12 I thought all of Durmstrang was dark wizards lol... |
NabikiB chapter 2 . 6/8 Wonderful chapter, except for the one bit of gross word misuse. 'vein' attempt? Really? I think the word that's wanted there is 'vain'. vein [vān] NOUN any of the tubes forming part of the blood circulation system of the body, carrying in most cases oxygen-depleted blood toward the with artery. (in general and figurative use) a blood vessel. "he felt the adrenaline course through his veins" synonyms: duct · tube · channel · passage · pipe · artery · vas · trachea (in plants) a slender rib running through a leaf or bract, typically dividing or branching, and containing a vascular bundle. a fracture in rock containing a deposit of minerals or ore and typically having an extensive course underground. "gold-bearing quartz veins" synonyms: layer · lode · seam · stratum · stratification · bed · deposit · accumulation This is the word you should have used: vain [vān] ADJECTIVE having or showing an excessively high opinion of one's appearance, abilities, or worth. "their flattery made him vain" synonyms: conceited · narcissistic · self-loving · in love with oneself · self-admiring · [more] producing no result; useless. "a vain attempt to tidy up the room" · [more] synonyms: futile · useless · pointless · worthless · nugatory · to no purpose · in vain · [more] having no meaning or likelihood of fulfillment. "a vain boast" synonyms: futile · useless · pointless · to no purpose · worthless · nugatory |
MavtheMustang chapter 8 . 5/22 Wish someone would write a fic where Amelia Bones gets put in her place along with the rest of the DMLE. Fucking hate that cunt |
Tr0janH0rse chapter 1 . 5/11 The writing is terrible, as is your story. |
Guest chapter 9 . 5/5 Nooooo I need to know how it finishessss |
Reviewer 33 chapter 1 . 4/25 Great book, read it a few times before, but I have to say, the name is even more glorious |
Guest chapter 3 . 4/18 Fedor and Viktor have barely known Snape for 12 hours but they are willing to split the basilisk almost equally with him just for his help in harvesting!? Wtf? |
Guest chapter 9 . 3/8 Can you please update this story again soon |
Qarz chapter 5 . 2/26 Right here, chapter 5 roughly 70 percent of the way is where the story went to hell. Shame. |
grimmich chapter 8 . 2/24 ...wow dumbledore, how ever did your learn your skills of subtlety? |
grimmich chapter 1 . 2/24 did snape just allude that the memory of harry has been erased from memory? |
Mation chapter 2 . 2/10 Hoping for update! |
RDLV chapter 9 . 2/4 I hope you pick this story up again someday. I enjoyed this immensely. |