| Reviews for Public Indecency |
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   Angel-Age54 chapter 1 . 3/25/2015 Haha! Love it! WOW |
| AlmondArlert chapter 1 . 1/7/2011 I laughed so loud at this my mum came in and threw her shoe at me XD iht was gawesome! |
| 0987654321poiuytrewqlkjhgfdszx chapter 1 . 11/28/2009 Oh MY GOSH! NYA! I THINK! I'M GONNA BLUSH! ACTUALLY! I AM BLUSHING! SO OMG! Luv it! |
| shadowninja-yuna chapter 1 . 6/19/2009 Ahahahaha, it's... just so amusing to think they'd do that in public. GO EIRI~! -cheers- |
| Sakuyan chapter 1 . 8/10/2008 Hahaha, I don't think Yuki cares if that happened to Shuichi or not...but I wonder WHY he did it? It was both humourous and total truth...Yuki would do that to him... |
| proud-yaoi-fangirl chapter 1 . 5/22/2008 Fabulous! I laughed so hard I cried... poor shuichi lol but good for Yuki |
| adinush chapter 1 . 5/4/2008 really funny! loved it |
| KA0RI chapter 1 . 11/5/2007 lol I am smiling like an idiot right now, I loved this oneshot, actually I love all your gravitation stories ; |
| JadePhoenix.393 chapter 1 . 9/15/2007 Ohmegosh~! That was so... cool! XD Perverted, funny, and Yuki- what else do you want? I definitely enjoyed it a lot~. ' “I didn't know you were so whipped,” Mika said with a red lipped smile.. ', ' “You're such an unmannered pig, Eiri. A predictable one, at that.” ' - now I always enjoy Mika's dialogues, but these two take the cake. By far. Nobody can possibly annoy Yuki like she does. Or maybe Shuichi. Lol. ' “My what? I'm not wearing a skirt!” Shuichi said, peering at his backside before hitting Yuki feebly in the chest. “Panties, either,” Yuki said with a leer, letting his fingertips graze the bare skin beneath the waistband of Shuichi's pants. ' - another one of my fav lines in the story; yeah, am highly perverted as well. o But these were really good. All in all, good story, with a nice flow throughout. There were some spelling/grammatical mistakes at places, but that's okay. A story written from Yuki's point of view should always be difficult to write ( at least for me -_- ), but you accomplished the task pretty well. Kudos for that~! |
| Pombella4 chapter 1 . 7/30/2007 Really funny. Poor Shuichi. But it was his fault for making Eiri wait! |
| none111 chapter 1 . 7/26/2007 lol..."so a few million people know I gave it to you in the bathroom," ...lol |
| Cassion chapter 1 . 6/13/2007 Haha, it's great. Kyuu~ |
| rry chapter 1 . 6/13/2007 *giggleing like the yaoi obsessed fangirl that she is* i love it! it's great! heeh-heeh! |
| Zaphi chapter 1 . 5/24/2007 Poor Shuichi! XD He just can't catch a break can he? |
| Eirilover223 chapter 1 . 5/22/2007 loved it. made me laugh _ |
