I doubt you are still around, and I also doubt you will read this if the message comes to your inbox or even see it. But after hearing this read on YouTube, I had to come and read it for myself, and I have to say this is an incredible story. You've told such a sad, sorrowful, yet compelling tale of love and loathing, hate and fear, and the sad state of Soren's childhood and how he wishes to keep history from repeating itself. This piece is excellently written, and I hope you were proud to have written it. I'm certainly stunned from having read it. This is one of the finest pieces I've ever read here, and I only wish the current crowd could write like this. I wish I could even write like this, but this story is in a ballpark higher than anything I could even imagine.

Well done. Even if you don't read this or see it, I wanted to say that nevertheless.

That was beautiful. I was almost crying at the end. This was...eye opening on what Soren was.

That was a great story.

That was sad, but good job :)

I love this. It's really good.

What a beautiful ending. This story was amazing and very well written keep up the good work!

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Absolutely amazing. Very suspenseful, and I loved your take on the more crazed side of Soren's psyche. Not much else praise I can give that isn't in previous reviews. Keep on writing!

What can I say that hasn't already been uttered? It was deep, meaningful, dramatic, and quite a thrill to read. An excellent tale, starring two very in-depth characters. Simply wonderful.

Wonderful story it's true to the personaitly of the characters and it kinda hits home in an emotional type of way ya know?

Holy crud, that was intense! Great job! I like.

Very nice! You should write one more chapter, though, about their child...

Great concept, marvelous execution.

Amazing. I really enjoyed reading this story. It had alot of detail and I liked the concept of it. Good job, I hope you write more stories with this quality.

Oh my gawd..

This... this was fantastic...

I am in a lost for words... Words to explain how amazing this turned out.

I am in awe...

Poor Soren... D:

Though I don't get how Ike's like royalty anyway. Isn't he just the adviser?