Hahaha! In Balthier's defense, totally worth it!

LOL! Oh I laughed so hard! Is there any chance you could write more of this? :)

Wow, this is fantastic stuff! You have an amazing writing style, your characterizations are flawless, which I really loved because Fran, Balthier and Basch are some of my favorite characters in the entire FF series and you write them SO well. Plus the story was absolutely HILARIOUS, I could perfectly picture Basch in Ashe's skirt at the end... Bwahahaha, great job, this is an instant fav.

I know you wrote this quite a long time ago, but I have to tell you...it was fantastic. I haven't laughed so hard when reading something in a while. It was articulate, the characters were so well-written, and it was completely hilarious. Major kudos.

ahahaha.

Balthier is quiet the dolt :]

I love this!

LOL. [ This is ridiculous, I love it.

This is the second time I've read this, and I laughed just as hard. I never get sick of any of this. Ever.

I love that line at the end.

'She turned her head slightly in his direction ,smirking devilishly "It looked good on you"'

HAHA! someone was fondling Fran's ears? that was priceless

It was very funny indeed! Please write more! Hito Me Bore will support you!

Agh, poor Basch, this story was well written, very fluent style. I would look forward to reading more FF XII-fanfictions of this kind

LOL! XD Oh, that last line from Ashe was priceless!

Both chapters were great. Write some more :]

Oh my God that was so funny!

Thank you for writing such a lovely, amusing story to keep me company while I suffer from sleeplessness.

I love you for this.