But... the chocolate...

Your possitively evil. Your killing meeeeee /

LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS!

do you mind if i make a little comic strip on the first part with cloud and zack. I'll put a link back to the story and credit you! :D I'm on DA!

Wow, this was so cute~~! o Whenever I see strawberries, I'll always think of Sephiroth and Zack, and this fanfic from how on. Keep writing awesome stories

Gah! That was so great! Strawberries have always been on of my favorite fruits, and now I have another reason to like them! :D

Holy FECK! That was hot! 8D Though, I find it hilarious that I just ate a bowl of 14 fresh-from-our-backyard-garden strawberries before reading this! *roflao*

THIS NEEDS A SECOND CHAPTER INVOLVING THE REST OF THE STRAWBERRIES, ZACK'S CHOCOLATE SAUCE, AND A CERTAIN LITTLE BLOND CADET. 8D/XDD

P.S. I see someone else took their name from Cloud's. XDD *points to your username*

Wow! This was hot! Zack should've known Seph wasn't just gonna give him a simple answer!XD

And Cloud at the beginning was cute! But wow! Seph is HOT in this fic! Way to be a good teacher General!XD

Great job!

omg this is so cute~ and sexy of course. i wish you can have a sequel with the chocolate syrup Xp from now on, everytime i see strawberries (my favorite fruit) ill remember this yummy fic

i liked it. Vary sexy... nice visuals.

Gorgeous oneshot! You're a genuis, every single strawberry entering my mouth will remind me of this stunning piece of fiction.

Thank you for writing this!

O.O

SMEX! ah jeez, I normaly don't like a M/M pairing involving Sephiroth but man this was good.

Very, very sexy! Too bad you don't have a sequel for their times with the chocolate syrup!

And I know how you feel, I hate the word "nipple" too. It just bugs me, and I hate writing it. I wish there was another, better word for it.

Now, I shall run off to read your other "M" rated fics~!

:Blushes:

That was really good -

Zack and Seph sure are dirty boys aren't they?

I have two words for you: Sexy sweetness! I really enjoyed that. By the way I appreciate the fact that you made Seph sappy. Its a wonderful change from him always being a badass. _ Not that I don't like him as a badass either...heh!

Wonderfully written! Thanks!

Yanno I love you right?

This is great.

XD