I really liked this piece. I was surprised to see it didn't have more reviews or favorites. It's very good!

Nice work :) You did a really good job with the tone of the story, especially around Danny's dialogue, which I think was handled very well. And the ending line was a nice touch. Keep up the good work :)
God bless!

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Cool writing style... very descriptive, leaves us somewhat in the dark about what their day was like. Good insights into a very IC Danny's mind. Great work!

That was so amazingly cute! I think it was so aforable that Sam was willing to help Danny because he was all frozen and couldn't do it himself! Hotness! And she's all confused because of his sleepy ramblings! Aw! Poor Sam, I wish she and Danny could just get together! That would make everyone's lives better!

You are an amazing author. That's some the best writing I've ever seen in fanfiction. Hands down.

That was beautiful. If I say anymore I'll just make it sound less great so I'll leave it at that.

That was wicked! Love the style, keep it up!

I thought that was heartfelt. I can totally feel for Sam, at that moment, hearing the mumblings of her best friend. The saying goes, if your that tired and you start rambling, its probably the truth. I mean Danny's not all there, just tired, but in that case, he's saying what he's saying from that bottom of his heart. It just happens to be, that Sam's in the room hearing all of this. Its good to wonder, what to ponder next, is this real or is she imagining all of his words. Danny's mumblings reveal, wishful thoughts. They are of things, he wants to happen between himself and Sam, now if he'd only do something about those feelings. Maybe act on them.

Aw.. on with the fluffiness!

It was...

It was...

FANTABULOUS.

I wish I could say more, but I'm tired and achey and feel mostly like Danny does in this fic right now...and so Fantabulous is all you can get from me.

But this fic was excellant. I love pseudo-fluff. I love it like whoa.

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:3

-The Adversary