Reviews for ATF 3 Making the Team
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LiveAndLetRain chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
"That was you?" Nathan finally calmed. "Your famous, they still talk about that at the EMT Training classes." It is nice to know you will be remembered for something!

"'Agent Larabee has that affect on many of us' she whispered softly as Vin passed."
This is very true.

Wrenches are evil. They plot against the human race. Never turn your back on one.

Your grammar and sentence structure are sometimes confusing, but the overall story is so entertaining that it helps distract from that. Still, it does get a little difficult to decipher at times.

Your set-up with Sentinels/Immortals/Dragons/Watchers is part of my head-cannon now. It has some changes, but they are mostly minute. The worlds mesh so well. My favorite AU of all time. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!
Netchka chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
Ooohhh. Buck is a naughty boy. But we all knew that already.
MavenAlysse chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
::contented sigh:: Lovely addition to the story.
Thanks for sharing.
Plk7777yahoo.com chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
Really enjoy the unfolding of how Vin joins ATF and the unique bonding with Chris. Can't wait to read more and look forward to Ezra's arrival.

Just a very picky FYI, Vin is 5'11 , 160 lbs. The actual RL actor heights are: JD 5'9, Ezra 5'10 , Vin 5'11, Chris 6', Josiah 6'1 , Buck and Nathan 6'2, although having met Andy Kavovit, I think that's a stretch. ;-) I have met them all and they are all mighty fine looking men, even better looking in person. One of the things that stood out was that each and every one of them had fantastic, brilliantly colored eyes. All really nice, friendly guys and they all got along great. Chemistry on and off screen.
misunderstoodemon chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
Still loving it to bits and pieces, love the touch with the presription for Buck. I am liking the dear doctor. Vin, as always, is lovely.

~misunderstoodemon
trecebo chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
I've read three stories so far and thought, "Self, we need to review, since it's been real fun." I replied, "Wall, sure thang, Self, ol buddy, ol pal."

I dig the boys and really have enjoyed your AU take. They translate to other universes so well. Can't wait to read more.
ferryboat George chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
Nice interduction
Sarai chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
Ouch to the ending.
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
Oh yeah1 I can imagine it got ugly alright! Whew you write a superb story1 Highly interesting and entertaining

! Welcome to M7 Fandom
steamfan chapter 1 . 7/15/2006
Oh, my gosh! I would never have believed it! But I guess some people are that stupid. You were right to put Buck in that situation cause since it really did happen, it would happen to him! HEHEHEHEHE!
memmaw46 chapter 1 . 6/13/2006
i love all your stories, they are all now among my favorites, more soon please.
Pookwana chapter 1 . 6/8/2006
For the second night, rather than do the work I brought home, I have sat reading. Thank you, I need to learn to relax more! Yet again another great section of this series. Poor Buck! Oh, and poor Vin! I thought he might burst into flame at the 'snapping of the the gloves'. Josiah's insight to the office set-up was great and in a short few lines you explained the make-up and characters of this group perfectly. I can't wait to read the next one...but off to work first! Thanks and keep them coming. Oh, and tell Ezra that I'll have the coffee brewing if he would like to stop by and pass some time. (Well just until you need him for the story naturally!)
Vinsmouse chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
I'll bet it did get ugly. Great story, I loved the way you had Vin telling on Buck. The doctor's office was absolutely wonderful, loved the whole thing. Looking forward to more.
Starwinder chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
Just read the 2nd and 3rd stories. Loved the description of Vin's apartment and the way he's helped the people in his building to clean it up and plant a garden etc.

Chris' drunkeness wasn't entirely unexpected and was a good way to get him introduced to Vin's home and extended family.

Loved Vin's visit to the doctor and the story about Buck and Twisty Terri was a howl. Humor is always a big plus in a story for me.

Still anxiously awaiting Ezra's appearance. Send him to Starbuck's and get him on into work!

Keep it coming.I'm looking forwards to the next story in the series.

Starwinder
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